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chiaroscuro arvo by master artist.... moth in spider web

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Date: 12/12/2023 8:44:00 PM
A moth's deadly answer of those who stray away from the light. C'est la vie mon amie, Sara.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/13/2023 3:49:00 AM
Yes, that is life, Hilo. For all the animal kingdoms and for mankind now survival of the fittest or smartest or the quickest or something like that. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
Date: 10/25/2023 1:55:00 PM
Indeed, spider webs are quite the work of art, as well as being practical for the spider. Poor moth needed more flight hours. Well done, Sara.
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Date: 10/25/2023 3:50:00 PM
Thank, you, Joe for the nice review of my work. I like and agree with your on your comments. Sara
Date: 10/22/2023 2:46:00 PM
That was an outstanding Haiku, Sara, but unfortunate moth:-) Excellent imagery and tagline. Have a fantastic evening,
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Date: 10/22/2023 3:35:00 AM
Spiders are wonderful artists ! How beautifully they make their gossamer webs and cunningly wait at the center to catch unsuspecting moths and small insects. Beautiful haiku, Sara!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/22/2023 4:28:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa, for your interpretation of my work. Yes, those spider webs are very intricately crafted and detailed. It is amazing how they do it, but I do hate to walk into one. Your visit and review were uplifting. Sara K
Date: 10/21/2023 1:31:00 PM
This is a very clever Haiku Sara - I too just looked the word up - light - dark. Love it! I’m actually scared of moths (phobia) but still feel sorry for its fate :) Great chosen words. Blessings to you. Xx
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/21/2023 2:38:00 PM
Yes, Christina, moths can be bad in that some will eat wool clothing or other wool items or can do damage to plants in the garden, etc. so maybe it is not a phobia but just a natural fear. Thanks for dropping by and leaving your thoughts and kind review of my work. I am glad you looked up the word. Sara K
Date: 10/21/2023 10:21:00 AM
Hello Sara,a brilliant haiku,well done! Have a blessed weekend!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/21/2023 2:34:00 PM
Why, thank you, Mulu. Sara K
Date: 10/20/2023 5:33:00 PM
Light and dark at play! Great!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/21/2023 2:34:00 PM
It was one of those afternoons with light at play. Thanks for the kind review, Kim. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K
Date: 10/19/2023 6:20:00 PM
What a work of art Sara :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/20/2023 3:36:00 AM
Why, thank you, Mystic. I appreciate the visit and smiley face. Sara K
Date: 10/18/2023 2:52:00 PM
A creative Haiku write/picture. Guess dinner is served. Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 10/19/2023 8:37:00 AM
Yes, it was for that spider anyway. Thank you, Paula, for dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara K
Date: 10/18/2023 2:25:00 PM
Poor moth....as the spider folds its claws in thanks for his meal. Life and death, intricately interwoven in the web of this existence!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/19/2023 8:37:00 AM
Yes, the spider lives this time while next struggle he might not be successful. Thanks for dropping by with a kind review of my work. Sara
Date: 10/18/2023 12:35:00 PM
- ... finally... dinner :) - Creative haiku, great done Sara :)- hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/18/2023 2:06:00 PM
Anne-Lise, I can imagine the terror and agony of the fly, but the spider was full. Thanks for dropping by . Sara
Date: 10/18/2023 8:51:00 AM
Chiaroscuro is adept for the poor moth, for it was free but now is trapped. Lovely haiku. Blessings
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/18/2023 8:57:00 AM
Victor, yes, poor moth had its light now it is gone. Thanks for the nice review of my work and always need the blessings. Sara K
Date: 10/18/2023 8:13:00 AM
Brilliant haiku, well written, i learned a new word too so thank you for that, chiaroscuro. Moth in spider web, what a deep line! You’ve painted imagery in such an eloquent manner in few syllables! Absolutely loved reading this and that picture fits the theme of the haiku so well! Love it
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/18/2023 8:56:00 AM
Glad you learned a new word. I hope you enjoy using it. Thanks for the visit and high praise. Sara K
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