Chetak

Stallions, like species of all creatures, countless in legends,
Chetak, an Indian horse, was peerless in elegance!
Arion, per myths, speaking-horse! Balius, immortal!
Chetak, wise! Served his master, never with ego at all!

Stallion of Maharana Pratap, the king of Mewar,
Had to indulge, with small and great kings, frequently in war;
As one of his great generals, so stood noble Chetak,
Fought war after wars; gained laurels in many a barrack!

Shorter than the tallest of breeds; gallantly graceful gaze!
Sparkling eyes! Soulful search! Not proud, yet, peacock-like neck blaze!
Like plant plumes, curling combing conveniently coiling ears!
Blue heron-like shiny blue skin! He's unique in all spheres!

In majesty, he was king-like! None but the king could hold!
In the run, jump, hop, and gallop, he was boldest of bold!
Pompous! Pugnacious! Alert like a tiger with her cubs!
Courageous to cross hurdles and fall! Or get into drubs!

In a war with the Mughals in the Aravali pass,
King Maharana Pratap and Akhbar were face to face!
Troops of both stood valorous; It's a dire dare: Do! Or die!
Kill or get killed! Or as weakling bid existence: Goodbye!

Remembering and applauding the courageous soldiers,
Who feels forget Chetak thrashing all iron-like boulders?
Fought furiously holding his master on his back strong,
Moved with him, like a leaf with the breeze, victory to bong!

Elephant of Akhbar, with his tusk, leg of Chetak, tore,
Firm on fighting for the fame of his master, pains he bore;
Opponent defeated; war won; reaching his master home,
He collapsed; Like a strong soldier; left to his loyal loam!




06 October 2021
A Notable Horse Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 10/16/2021 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Chetak" is a creative story/write. Love It. Have a blessed autumn day...............
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/17/2021 6:03:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 10/16/2021 12:58:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this remarkable legend of Chetak! Congrats on your win, Chris!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/17/2021 6:03:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 10/15/2021 2:04:00 PM
Amazing story so well told Chris with vivid images. Congratulations on your win.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/17/2021 6:02:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 10/15/2021 2:54:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... I learned a valuable "horse-lesson" today. Thanks likewise for your comments ... I do appreciate them. God bless you.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/15/2021 4:22:00 AM
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Date: 10/14/2021 4:31:00 PM
Congratulations. Wonderful poem!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/14/2021 8:59:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 10/7/2021 7:40:00 AM
I knew someone would surely write on chetak. You did this very well, very informative. Your poems are always loaded. Enjoy your day.
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Date: 10/14/2021 8:59:00 PM
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Date: 10/7/2021 7:35:00 AM
My dear sir, the bravery of Maharana pratap singh and Chetak were attracting me from many days to write, but as my exams were going on I wasn't able to think even a rhyme. But as my cram work got over and I read your poem " Chetak " I got inspired to write . Thanks for inspiring me. And sorry if I annoyed you with my melancholy.
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Date: 10/14/2021 9:00:00 PM
Thank you very much.
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