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Chetak

Stallions, like species of all creatures, countless in legends, Chetak, an Indian horse, was peerless in elegance! Arion, per myths, speaking-horse! Balius, immortal! Chetak, wise! Served his master, never with ego at all! Stallion of Maharana Pratap, the king of Mewar, Had to indulge, with small and great kings, frequently in war; As one of his great generals, so stood noble Chetak, Fought war after wars; gained laurels in many a barrack! Shorter than the tallest of breeds; gallantly graceful gaze! Sparkling eyes! Soulful search! Not proud, yet, peacock-like neck blaze! Like plant plumes, curling combing conveniently coiling ears! Blue heron-like shiny blue skin! He's unique in all spheres! In majesty, he was king-like! None but the king could hold! In the run, jump, hop, and gallop, he was boldest of bold! Pompous! Pugnacious! Alert like a tiger with her cubs! Courageous to cross hurdles and fall! Or get into drubs! In a war with the Mughals in the Aravali pass, King Maharana Pratap and Akhbar were face to face! Troops of both stood valorous; It's a dire dare: Do! Or die! Kill or get killed! Or as weakling bid existence: Goodbye! Remembering and applauding the courageous soldiers, Who feels forget Chetak thrashing all iron-like boulders? Fought furiously holding his master on his back strong, Moved with him, like a leaf with the breeze, victory to bong! Elephant of Akhbar, with his tusk, leg of Chetak, tore, Firm on fighting for the fame of his master, pains he bore; Opponent defeated; war won; reaching his master home, He collapsed; Like a strong soldier; left to his loyal loam! 06 October 2021 A Notable Horse Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori

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Date: 10/16/2021 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Chetak" is a creative story/write. Love It. Have a blessed autumn day...............
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/17/2021 6:03:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 10/16/2021 12:58:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this remarkable legend of Chetak! Congrats on your win, Chris!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/17/2021 6:03:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 10/15/2021 2:04:00 PM
Amazing story so well told Chris with vivid images. Congratulations on your win.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/17/2021 6:02:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 10/15/2021 2:54:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... I learned a valuable "horse-lesson" today. Thanks likewise for your comments ... I do appreciate them. God bless you.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/15/2021 4:22:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 10/14/2021 4:31:00 PM
Congratulations. Wonderful poem!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/14/2021 8:59:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 10/7/2021 7:40:00 AM
I knew someone would surely write on chetak. You did this very well, very informative. Your poems are always loaded. Enjoy your day.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/14/2021 8:59:00 PM
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Date: 10/7/2021 7:35:00 AM
My dear sir, the bravery of Maharana pratap singh and Chetak were attracting me from many days to write, but as my exams were going on I wasn't able to think even a rhyme. But as my cram work got over and I read your poem " Chetak " I got inspired to write . Thanks for inspiring me. And sorry if I annoyed you with my melancholy.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/14/2021 9:00:00 PM
Thank you very much.

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