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Chessboard

grief joy grief joy black white squares of life who is the chess player 20.10.2019 Get In Touch With Your Zen Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Richard Lamoureux Syllables Per Line: 4 5 6

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2019 5:58:00 PM

totally awesome!

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 10/23/2019 4:53:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea)

Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/22/2019 11:14:00 AM

This is very clever Kurt :-) x

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 10/22/2019 2:27:00 PM

Thank you, Elaine)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/21/2019 2:16:00 PM

You have created a captivating picture, this should place high, best of luck in the contest, Kurt!

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 10/22/2019 2:27:00 PM

Thanks, Michelle)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/20/2019 7:49:00 PM

I like this one!

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 10/21/2019 12:00:00 PM

I like you like it. Thank you, Kim)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/20/2019 2:03:00 PM

Checks all the boxes, so to speak, perfectly! Love it. ~ Gershon

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 10/21/2019 11:59:00 AM

Yeah, checkmate the chess player. Thanks, Wolf)

Wendy Watson

Date: 10/20/2019 12:26:00 PM

I think this is really clever, Curt and loved the comparison of life's varying experiences with the chess board and connotations of risky moves involved.

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 10/21/2019 11:57:00 AM

Thank you, Wendy)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/20/2019 11:57:00 AM

Kurt, You found a true Zen meditative moment in the game. Very well written. -Richard

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 10/21/2019 11:57:00 AM

Thank you, my brother in Zen)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/20/2019 11:44:00 AM

- A great question, Kurt - Good luck in the contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 10/21/2019 11:56:00 AM

Thank you, Sunshine. Rays of love)