Cherry Thief

Cherry Thief
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 Dear Cherry,

Ontop of my shake you set in red glow,
you looked so delicious and vibrant,
I wanted to take you between my lips 
and taste your sweet juices. But then, you 
were gone. Before I knew it, someone took
you, and he held you between his perched kisser.
I watched as he savored you tender moistness with
delight. The last time I saw you, you were gone
with a swift gulp of his greedy throat. Goodbye
beloved fruit, you were so quickly taken that
we didn't have much time, to even say hello.
Perhaps we shall meet again one day, and 
when that day comes...my husband wont be 
near you...

(LOL..just a fun little poem)
5/24/14-Jessica Thompson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mister Roboto Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 12:55 AM
talk about a metaphor. hell of a juxtaposition and damn my eyes for bulging as I read this. It truly is a 'Moving Picture', which by the way, is a rare triple entendre.
Thompson Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 8:15 PM
Thank you JSL, so nice to read all your kind comments about my work. I am so glad you enjoyed this piece. I will come by soon as read yours as well. Take care my friend, Jess :)
Clemons Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 2:42 PM
Such a carefree, beautiful poem, Jessica. indeed, the fun is imbedded in the metaphoric writing. Great description. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
Thompson Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 8:14 PM
Thank you so much Jiril, I am glad you enjoyed this piece. I will deff come by very soon as read some of you work. Take care friend, Jess
Gibson Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 12:50 PM
This is good, Jessica. Hope the soup is treating you well, my friend.
Thompson Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 2:59 PM
Thank you Faye, I am glad you liked this piece. I hope you are doing well my friend. Take care, Jess :)
A  Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 8:52 PM
Hi Jessica, I like this. The color, you expose, happens to be one of my favorite colors. Cherry Red. The glow's above all. PS.... love the fun little poem...............SKAT
Thompson Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 11:51 PM
Thank you so much Skat..I just wanted this to be a fun little poem..and My husband even got a kick that I actually wrote a poem on what happened lol. Really glad you enjoyed and took time to comment. Always glad to hear from you. Take care my friend, Jess :)
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