Cherry Terror

As the sun sets my mind runs with the thoughts that I'm stung with
Ever since Cinderella stung me I've been sprung since
Only wanted for the helicopter gunships
As my tongue slips Cherry Terror
In the woods my friends love to play
A-Team business on the menu press play
Talk about the Anchor, talk about the Navy , talk about the pain I still carry
Some fathers, some a couple hard heads
but they all good men or they wouldn't walk with me
Talk about the Navy, Talk about the Anchor
The weight you couldn't carry it
Talking 250 tons it would bury you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/1/2016 7:34:00 AM
a raw, gritty little write here, reads very natural; it's what i call a 'slow-burner', meaning that it gains impact with repeated readings - this was a tough contest, well done!
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Date: 2/25/2016 8:53:00 PM
Hello. I wanted you to know that I think your poem is tremendous and I have posted a blog that highlights some of the entries; yours has been mentioned. It is fresh, strong. Check out my blog, when you can. Cyndi
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Date: 1/10/2016 6:34:00 PM
Hello Timothy, I like the opening line very much. As the sun sets----- a deep write my friend.... Happy to hear from you. Love LINDA
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