Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Limerick

Cherished Moments

Destiny brought them extremely close,
Emotional flame highest arose,
Big tummies failed to kiss,
Cherished moments piped hiss,
Better obese as appetite froze !





Limerick - 9/9/6/6/9
Written on 27/5/14
Contest- Bawdy, Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss clawdy
Sponsor- Roy Jerden

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole June 17, 2014 at 9:30 AM Congrats on your fine win in the contest.

Poet Destroyer A June 14, 2014 at 12:39 AM Dr Upma

Poet Destroyer A June 14, 2014 at 12:38 AM Lol...yeah.... i know I have one of them smartphone, it doesn't allow typos...... i don't like when it does that. Anyway thank you for the comment on my comment Abdulhafeez Oyewole June 17, 2014 at 9:35 AM :)

Poet Destroyer A June 14, 2014 at 12:23 AM Dr Umpa,, :) Congratulations, on your win. "Luv Linda" Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 14, 2014 at 12:29 AM Thnx Linda ! A lil jumbled words in my name .... It's Upma dear !

Sara Kendrick June 9, 2014 at 6:12 PM I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it exceptional…Sara Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 14, 2014 at 12:30 AM Thanks for lovely comments Sara ! An honour for me always !

Elaine George June 9, 2014 at 4:44 PM Many congra'ts on your win with this fine Limerick, Dr. Upma. Elaine Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 14, 2014 at 12:27 AM Thanks Elaine !

Mohan Chutani June 9, 2014 at 12:36 AM Congrats on the win Upma, a good limerick. Mohan Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 9, 2014 at 1:42 PM Thanks for the visit n the wishes Mohan !

Richard Lamoureux June 8, 2014 at 8:48 AM Nicely penned, congratulations. Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 9, 2014 at 1:41 PM Thanks Richard ! So glad to hv ur visit n wishes,, appreciated // Upma //

Skat A June 8, 2014 at 7:33 AM Dr Umpa,, Congrats, on your "Bawdy, Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss Clawdy" win........ Enjoyable Limerick :) LOVE ~SKAT~ Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 9, 2014 at 1:39 PM Thanks Skat for the wishes n the visit // Upma//

Dr.Ram Mehta June 7, 2014 at 9:57 PM Congratulations on your fine win with this well humored limerick, Dr.Upma Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 9, 2014 at 1:38 PM Thanks Dr Ram !

Debbie Guzzi June 7, 2014 at 8:12 PM [Destiny brought them too close/Emotion and flames high rose/but they were too fat/and that was just that/private parts were too far so they froze] Congrad's on your win Light & Love Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 9, 2014 at 1:37 PM Glad to have such elaborate lovely comments Debbie ! Thanks for the visit n the wishes !

Paul Callus June 7, 2014 at 5:22 PM Great humour, Upma! loved it...the last line is so witty:) congrats on a merited win. // paul Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 9, 2014 at 1:35 PM Thanks for wishes Paul ,, glad u liked //Upma//

Sara Kendrick May 29, 2014 at 5:15 AM Cute one..Where there is a will there is a way..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats..Sara Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 9, 2014 at 1:33 PM Thnx Sara for lovely comments n wishes !

Andrea Dietrich May 27, 2014 at 11:17 PM oh MY. That does not sound good for them. hahaha. As appetite froze. Great double meaning!! Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 28, 2014 at 5:58 AM Yes u got it ! Trust all get it so well ,,, else its no bawdy ! thnx for the read !