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Cherished Moments

Destiny brought them extremely close, Emotional flame highest arose, Big tummies failed to kiss, Cherished moments piped hiss, Better obese as appetite froze ! Limerick - 9/9/6/6/9 Written on 27/5/14 Contest- Bawdy, Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss clawdy Sponsor- Roy Jerden

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 6/17/2014 9:30:00 AM

Congrats on your fine win in the contest.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/14/2014 12:39:00 AM

Dr Upma

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/14/2014 12:38:00 AM

Lol...yeah.... i know I have one of them smartphone, it doesn't allow typos...... i don't like when it does that. Anyway thank you for the comment on my comment

Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 6/17/2014 9:35:00 AM

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/14/2014 12:23:00 AM

Dr Umpa,, :) Congratulations, on your win. "Luv Linda"

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/14/2014 12:29:00 AM

Thnx Linda ! A lil jumbled words in my name .... It's Upma dear !

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/9/2014 6:12:00 PM

I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it exceptional…Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/14/2014 12:30:00 AM

Thanks for lovely comments Sara ! An honour for me always !

Elaine George

Date: 6/9/2014 4:44:00 PM

Many congra'ts on your win with this fine Limerick, Dr. Upma. Elaine

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/14/2014 12:27:00 AM

Thanks Elaine !

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/9/2014 12:36:00 AM

Congrats on the win Upma, a good limerick. Mohan

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/9/2014 1:42:00 PM

Thanks for the visit n the wishes Mohan !

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/8/2014 8:48:00 AM

Nicely penned, congratulations.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/9/2014 1:41:00 PM

Thanks Richard ! So glad to hv ur visit n wishes,, appreciated // Upma //

Skat A

Date: 6/8/2014 7:33:00 AM

Dr Umpa,, Congrats, on your "Bawdy, Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss Clawdy" win........ Enjoyable Limerick :) LOVE ~SKAT~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/9/2014 1:39:00 PM

Thanks Skat for the wishes n the visit // Upma//

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/7/2014 9:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine win with this well humored limerick, Dr.Upma

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/9/2014 1:38:00 PM

Thanks Dr Ram !

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/7/2014 8:12:00 PM

[Destiny brought them too close/Emotion and flames high rose/but they were too fat/and that was just that/private parts were too far so they froze] Congrad's on your win Light & Love

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/9/2014 1:37:00 PM

Glad to have such elaborate lovely comments Debbie ! Thanks for the visit n the wishes !

Paul Callus

Date: 6/7/2014 5:22:00 PM

Great humour, Upma! loved it...the last line is so witty:) congrats on a merited win. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/9/2014 1:35:00 PM

Thanks for wishes Paul ,, glad u liked //Upma//

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/29/2014 5:15:00 AM

Cute one..Where there is a will there is a way..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/9/2014 1:33:00 PM

Thnx Sara for lovely comments n wishes !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/27/2014 11:17:00 PM

oh MY. That does not sound good for them. hahaha. As appetite froze. Great double meaning!!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/28/2014 5:58:00 AM

Yes u got it ! Trust all get it so well ,,, else its no bawdy ! thnx for the read !