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Image result for pictures of a romantic garden in spring"Beyond right and wrong, there is a garden(actually says field), meet me there." Rumi...For some reason, my poem is not posting..

Cherish Each Moment

Let us cherish each moment we have, Embracing love and words written. In our private garden, Among a rhapsody of blooms, Please come meet there. In our garden, Is the love of poetry and roses. Glorious garden where two souls meet. Like a rainbow after a storm gives assurance, Please touch my deep interbeing! Reach deep with your melody. The color of your eyes soft and warm Leads the gardener to enter the Window to your soul. In this garden of where our souls touch, Let us dance with rhapsody! Never tiring__ Lovers' arms forever entwined. Captivated by the colors and fragrance divine, Of this our magical place. Embracing the spontaneity of life’s dance 'Twas like an absorbing rainbow after a storm. Love’s beauty will always have a place, In our hearts and minds, When we think of this cherished moment in time. It will come like the rhythm of ocean’s waves. Upon each beach’s sandy shore, a steady flow. In moments of quiet interludes Of our lives, a flash of memory will entreat us so...
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Date: 3/7/2024 8:35:00 PM
Inspiring, uplifting, ethereal -- I'm at a loss for more words, though I'm sure they exist. This is magnificent poetry, Sara, methinks. Right into my FAVES. Thank you, Gershon
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/8/2024 2:25:00 AM
Why, thank you, Gershon. I am honored that you would fav it. Sara K
Date: 3/5/2024 11:19:00 AM
wow, so descriptive. Were you writing this for a contest or just being inspired by love and spring?
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/6/2024 5:37:00 AM
Thanks for letting me know. I don't know if I am up to doing that. LOL..I will look into it. Sara K
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/5/2024 1:01:00 PM
oh ok. I bet if edited, it would work for some contests I've seen,
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/5/2024 11:22:00 AM
Andrea, I was just thinking about a long time ago a specific moment in time when I wrote this one. Not for a contest. Thank you for dropping by. Sara K
Date: 3/5/2024 11:16:00 AM
- "Love's beauty will always have a place" in a garden as you describe it, Sara :) - A beautiful poem, I really appreciate this poem :) - hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/5/2024 11:20:00 AM
Why, thank you, Anne-Lise. Yes, we have to have love in our lives. Your visit was uplifting. Sara K
Date: 3/5/2024 9:15:00 AM
Indeed, Sara, "love's beauty will always have a place!" You have woven words into magic images, a garden of "quiet interludes" and an invitation for romance where "two souls" meet in a cherished, private, and protected, arbor. Just lovely, Sara! Thank you for these moments of blessing! Sending you blessings!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/5/2024 11:15:00 AM
Why, thank you, Sam. Yes, I think we all want love instead of what is happening sometimes in the world today. Your visit was delightful. Sara K
Date: 3/5/2024 8:12:00 AM
Dear Sara, Your artistic imagery of love and nature intertwining in a private garden took me to a quiet place, for we are to embrace life's beauty and spontaneity, to dance with rhapsody, and cherish every fleeting moment. Your words are a melody that lingers on and on. - Blessings, Daniel
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/5/2024 8:15:00 AM
Why, thank you, Daniel. I am glad you enjoyed reading it. Sara K
Date: 3/5/2024 6:56:00 AM
In your garden it sounds inspiring with friendship and love. My entry is for Kim Rogers contest .
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/5/2024 8:14:00 AM
Alright. Thanks for letting me know, Eve. Your visits are encouraging. Sara K
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