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lavender memories ~ quivering dewdrops on lotus-leaves,  yet ever-lasting.  I cherish them, not let them slip away.               I cherish  a delightful picture of a nervous rookie school-teacher,  excited and thrilled, beaming and apprehensive,  on a bright crisp fall morning,  surrounded by her enthusiastic giggling students ....  I cherish  an invaluable handwritten letter by  my ailing father, from the hospital-bed,  who never failed to inspire courage,,  telling me to continue creative writing against all odds..  I cherish  a gold brooch, intricately designed,  gorgeous with iridescent pearls and radiant corals,  elegantly worn by my mother, a blushing young bride  on her wedding day... I cherish  a poem, lyrical and moving ...  describing her favourite flower - demure jasmine ..  fragrant, exuding mystifying aroma ...  penned by my childhood friend  I cherish a dried rose,  ravishing ruby-red when fresh,  saved, by a young fluttering heart, inside a diary of teenage years,  (only she can still smell the faint scent),  emanating crimson adoration  of a bashful boy - who never knew - she did. April 4, 2021 Inspired by "Writing Prompt - Cherish" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France FIRST PLACE

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Date: 4/12/2021 8:23:00 AM
Loved all the beautiful moments that you cherish.. dear Mala... I specially loved 'the invaluable handwritten letter by your dad'.... those are truly treasures to hold so dear.... Congrats on your win... Big hugs... ~ Ani
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/12/2021 9:43:00 AM
Dear Anitha, Thank you so much. I didn't know what to include in my poem - there's so much to cherish - it would be a long list. My Father was the person who inspired me to write at a time when girls were not encouraged much in literary endeavours. Love ~ Mala
Date: 4/10/2021 2:28:00 AM
A deserved win. A lot to cherish. Thanks for sharing your thoughts mala. More blessings.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/12/2021 9:40:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dear Poet. So true - a lot to cherish. Really appreciate your inspiring words. BW ~ Mala
Date: 4/9/2021 7:59:00 AM
Mala, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt Cherish with this beautiful poem, so many things to cherish, well done, love _Constance
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Date: 4/12/2021 9:39:00 AM
Thank you so much, Constance. Really appreciate your inspiring words. Love ~ Mala
Date: 4/9/2021 1:32:00 AM
Congrats dear Malabika on all the beauty in your poem that you cherish...Congrats dear friend much love :)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/12/2021 9:37:00 AM
Thank you, Carol. Your loving words are so much appreciated ~ Mala
Date: 4/8/2021 9:16:00 AM
Hi Malabika, These are precious memories of the things you cherish and hold dear. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/8/2021 9:37:00 AM
Thanks, Alexis. Appreciate your kind words. Love ~ Mala
Date: 4/8/2021 8:14:00 AM
Oh, wonderful memories, beautifully written. Congrats, Mala.
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Date: 4/8/2021 9:37:00 AM
Thanks, Marilene, really appreciate your kind words. Love ~ Mala
Date: 4/6/2021 3:48:00 PM
this is REALLY nice. Such beautiful images for things cherished!!!
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Date: 4/6/2021 3:59:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea, for reading this poem. Appreciate your lovely comment - means a lot. BW ~ Mala
Date: 4/6/2021 5:26:00 AM
Those golden moments from whom we loved are unforgettable! Very nicely-penned. Best wishes dear Mala. A sure win!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/6/2021 6:54:00 AM
Dear JCB, yes, those are the golden moments and golden memories. Thanks for reading. Love ~ Mala
Date: 4/5/2021 3:18:00 PM
I can see you cherish many sentimental things of great beauty and attachment, good luck in the contest. Well written piece. :)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/5/2021 3:25:00 PM
Thanks, Rose. I do cherish many things I am attached to. Appreciate your lovely comment. BW ~ Mala
Date: 4/4/2021 3:25:00 PM
Hello Mala, yes these are cherished memories that you have. Happy Easter. Enjoy your evening my friend. love, friendship. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/5/2021 10:17:00 AM
Hello Mala, I hope you had a wonderful Easter. You are welcome my friend. Love and Friendship. Hugs.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/4/2021 3:29:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene. Really appreciate your encouraging comments. Happy Easter. Love, Friendship, Hugs, My Friend!

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