Chemistry

The simultaneous effect of two glances across the last remaining distance between them Then when first they met Now when they are apart Each carrying within the beat of the other's heart

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 3/5/2009 4:14:00 AM

Chemistry is alive and well in matters of the heart! Nice end rhme and superb construction. BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/18/2009 6:46:00 PM

Gerry - this poem is short to the point and absolutely perfect - nice to meet you - welcome, though i appear to be a little late - very gifted poetry - Often i tend to be a tad long winded in my poems I reckon - God Bless, MJ

Daver Austin

Date: 2/17/2009 5:15:00 AM

Hi, Gerry. My old friend passed on...We both of us are/were musicians. By "overtones" I'm talking about the subtle harmonics in one's voice and behavior, the little asides embellishments. I like your poem, by the way. My e-mail is davidraustin@charter.net. Love, daver

Laurie Ginn

Date: 2/17/2009 12:41:00 AM

Eeshh, lol, just so you know thats my excited noise, sooo good. I love your work Gerry. These last Ive read are going into favs. Few words well written mmmm priceless. Laurie