Cheese With Some Whine

She told me she loved me but what a lie,
her clock was ticking - child days flying by,
the devious plan was set,
I fell for the scam, you bet...
My kingdom for a noose around one-eye!

08/02/2016

Just for contest purposes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Godwin Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 11:09 PM
I think this is quite good, George - very clever and creative. Yepper, I enjoyed it and wish you all the best ... CayCay
Aul Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 9:40 AM
Thanks for the nice comment................... George
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