Cheery Sea Sanctuary

I simply love this enchanting poem. So soothing. "Where in the shimmering shades of teal~ peace remains engraved with sparkling pearl dust.." In the depths of the shimmering shades of teal, an uncanny peace remains. Your selection of words produces such an effect that I can feel the tranquility there and hear the symphony of the waves' mermaid serenades! To my FAVE.

IE, this is a lovely depiction of being next to a beautiful seaside area. I can imagine being there. Your words are so skillfully assembled that it whisks my heart to the shore. You're making me smile even more.

Ink, a beautiful and enchanting poem, congratulations on your winning placement!

Nice opening assonance in waves, mermaid and serenades…mimics the song! Nice one, Ink!

A really serene composition, wonderful in its spareness. "Dancing daisies lead the way to a joyful haven of mystical topaz serenity. Your use of analogies and vivid imagery makes your ethereal writings truly shine. Good luck in the contest, dear Ink.

A very calm piece, terrific in its simplicity. "dancing daisies to a cheery sanctuary of mystic topaz tranquillity." I do love to see them dance. They twirl so well, flowers, trees etc. Best wishes for this lovely piece Dear Ink. And yeah! I hope you get better soon.

Lovely poetry, dear Ink...keep writing! <3

You always do etheree poems so well, you must have a good teacher/mentor.. You never keep them simple with your great imagery and use of metaphors.. Best of luck in the contest..

just beautiful, i love the images and feelings you share , thanks a lot fir the enchanting reading yann

this is a real beauty. I can see why you like this form so much! I like to rhyme my etheree from time to time, even though that is not how they should be. As a free verse writer, this form is right up your alley.

Glorious Etheree. It does bring me cheer today.

This is a captivating etheree.

Wow! Wonderful! A favorite.

Impressive work. Reads like a good contender to me if for a contest. Way to go. Sara K

I listen to the waves singing mermaid serenades,.. damn the absolute enchantment from the get go… love love looove.. dancing daisies to a cheery sanctuary of mystic topaz tranquility… a gorgeous realm of joyful spring… shimmering shades of teal~ peace remains engraved with sparkling pearl dust.. the dreaminess of this is captured perfectly.. love the way this piece bring so much light papi… marvelously blissful ethereeee

Great alliteration as always . Love it