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Cheery Sea Sanctuary

I listen to the waves singing mermaid serenades, luring~ dancing daisies to a cheery sanctuary of mystic topaz tranquility… Where in the shimmering shades of teal~ peace remains engraved with sparkling pearl dust..

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Valsa George

Date: 6/18/2024 6:31:00 AM

I simply love this enchanting poem. So soothing. "Where in the shimmering shades of teal~ peace remains engraved with sparkling pearl dust.." In the depths of the shimmering shades of teal, an uncanny peace remains. Your selection of words produces such an effect that I can feel the tranquility there and hear the symphony of the waves' mermaid serenades! To my FAVE.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 6/10/2024 6:16:00 AM

IE, this is a lovely depiction of being next to a beautiful seaside area. I can imagine being there. Your words are so skillfully assembled that it whisks my heart to the shore. You're making me smile even more.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/9/2024 4:40:00 PM

Ink, a beautiful and enchanting poem, congratulations on your winning placement!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/8/2024 8:34:00 AM

Nice opening assonance in waves, mermaid and serenades…mimics the song! Nice one, Ink!

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/8/2024 7:46:00 AM

A really serene composition, wonderful in its spareness. "Dancing daisies lead the way to a joyful haven of mystical topaz serenity. Your use of analogies and vivid imagery makes your ethereal writings truly shine. Good luck in the contest, dear Ink.

Tonye George

Date: 6/8/2024 5:12:00 AM

A very calm piece, terrific in its simplicity. "dancing daisies to a cheery sanctuary of mystic topaz tranquillity." I do love to see them dance. They twirl so well, flowers, trees etc. Best wishes for this lovely piece Dear Ink. And yeah! I hope you get better soon.

Paige Hind

Date: 6/7/2024 3:23:00 PM

Lovely poetry, dear Ink...keep writing! <3

Silent One

Date: 6/7/2024 11:49:00 AM

You always do etheree poems so well, you must have a good teacher/mentor.. You never keep them simple with your great imagery and use of metaphors.. Best of luck in the contest..

Yann Rolland

Date: 6/6/2024 3:18:00 PM

just beautiful, i love the images and feelings you share , thanks a lot fir the enchanting reading yann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2024 1:18:00 PM

this is a real beauty. I can see why you like this form so much! I like to rhyme my etheree from time to time, even though that is not how they should be. As a free verse writer, this form is right up your alley.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/6/2024 1:45:00 AM

Glorious Etheree. It does bring me cheer today.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 6/5/2024 6:42:00 PM

This is a captivating etheree.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 6/5/2024 5:51:00 PM

Wow! Wonderful! A favorite.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/5/2024 2:53:00 PM

Impressive work. Reads like a good contender to me if for a contest. Way to go. Sara K

Di11y Da11y

Date: 6/5/2024 10:35:00 AM

So soothing amidst all the current chaos - good luck with the contest x

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 6/5/2024 8:32:00 AM

I listen to the waves singing mermaid serenades,.. damn the absolute enchantment from the get go… love love looove.. dancing daisies to a cheery sanctuary of mystic topaz tranquility… a gorgeous realm of joyful spring… shimmering shades of teal~ peace remains engraved with sparkling pearl dust.. the dreaminess of this is captured perfectly.. love the way this piece bring so much light papi… marvelously blissful ethereeee

Tom Woody

Date: 6/5/2024 5:47:00 AM

Ahhhh... Is there any space left for me? Sounds so peaceful Inky

The Aura Rhymes

Date: 6/5/2024 1:31:00 AM

Great alliteration as always . Love it