Cheery Bird

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bird
black-wings
salmon-beak
most are scarlet
pronounced, 'E-'E-vee
species, Latin: clothing
Hawaiian royalty's capes 
ritual end ere the kingdom
refuges establish safety zones
'E-E-vee's cheery someday is here, YES!

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Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/9/2024 5:02:00 PM

William, wonderfully creative, congratulations on your placement!

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/9/2024 7:11:00 PM

Lab Tech who works today he read your rules, I'll deal with that staff off on wknds--she didn't. sor

Deb M

Date: 6/5/2024 3:19:00 PM

What an amazing beautiful bird Hilo! Such lovely colourings! Delightful poem! Debx

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/5/2024 8:02:00 PM

My townhouse bird feeders are people-savvy Java Sparrows & Mejiro's, and the nectar feeders 'I'iwi's are forest birds--thinks people-daffy--agreed, Aloha, William