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Cheery

Grams
Perky
Self-lighting-
Burning rubber
Speeds in her bright red
Scooter succumbs to the
Senior Center for front row
Seat for Bingo playful challenge
Praying not to fall asleep mid-way
Snoring holding her lucky rabbits' foot

5/28/2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kitchin Avatar
June 9, 2024 at 5:00 PM
Eve, a cute poem, congratulations on your winning placement!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 11:26 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative/fun "Cherry" write with a great/true picture. Watch out for these scooters they will run one over. "Good Luck"  Have A Fun/Cherry Day Writing Away..................
Proxenos Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 3:00 AM
Sounds like you are relaxing a little my friend and you will make new friends where you are. Well with pink hair, tattoos on my ankle and my funky way of dressing the residents have got used to the funky Granny around and after all my grand daughter is only 16 months old . Well therefore enjoying this new found freedom and the perk is that our children stay only 10 .minutes away from love and hugs Jenn. I think you might like the poem I wrote for Granddaughter which I have just posted.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 9:39 AM
Loved this quite funny Etheree. It certainly is cheerful.
Rodgers Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 8:52 AM
Dear Eve, What a riot! I love the imagery of your perky grandma zooming around on her bright red scooter, all geared up for Bingo at the Senior Center. And that ending—snoring with her lucky rabbit's foot—priceless! Your words capture the spirited essence of family and fun. Keep bringing those smiles! - Blessings, Daniel
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