Cheery

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Grams Perky Self-lighting- Burning rubber Speeds in her bright red Scooter succumbs to the Senior Center for front row Seat for Bingo playful challenge Praying not to fall asleep mid-way Snoring holding her lucky rabbits' foot 5/28/2024

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Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/9/2024 5:00:00 PM

Eve, a cute poem, congratulations on your winning placement!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/30/2024 11:26:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your creative/fun "Cherry" write with a great/true picture. Watch out for these scooters they will run one over. "Good Luck" Have A Fun/Cherry Day Writing Away..................

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/29/2024 3:00:00 AM

Sounds like you are relaxing a little my friend and you will make new friends where you are. Well with pink hair, tattoos on my ankle and my funky way of dressing the residents have got used to the funky Granny around and after all my grand daughter is only 16 months old . Well therefore enjoying this new found freedom and the perk is that our children stay only 10 .minutes away from love and hugs Jenn. I think you might like the poem I wrote for Granddaughter which I have just posted.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/28/2024 9:39:00 AM

Loved this quite funny Etheree. It certainly is cheerful.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/28/2024 8:52:00 AM

Dear Eve, What a riot! I love the imagery of your perky grandma zooming around on her bright red scooter, all geared up for Bingo at the Senior Center. And that ending—snoring with her lucky rabbit's foot—priceless! Your words capture the spirited essence of family and fun. Keep bringing those smiles! - Blessings, Daniel