Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Cheerios and Donuts

When allowed to grow, Cheerios turn into donuts
Also the holes are used for losing weight in grownups 
Better than nothing
What's all the fussing
Don't know about youse guys but sounds kinda bogus

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Darlene De Beaulieu February 3, 2018 at 7:57 PM Hello Jack, once I began to read this poem, I could not stop laughing. A G-R-E- A- T,poem. have a nice evening my friend. xxx-ooo. Darlene De Beaulieu October 10, 2019 at 1:10 PM Oh , this poem will be my fav. Have a nice day my friend. xxx-ooo. Darlene De Beaulieu February 6, 2018 at 8:46 PM xxx-0000. Darlene De Beaulieu February 6, 2018 at 8:45 PM you are so right! Jack Ellison February 3, 2018 at 8:21 PM SO SWEET YOU ARE MISS DARLENE!!! Methinks I can hear you still giggling!!! LOL Love, Happy Jack xoxoxox

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 3, 2018 at 8:42 AM Giggles! Brilliant like your smile :) Jack Ellison February 3, 2018 at 8:46 AM Awwwww! What are you doing tonight???

Lim'Rik Flats February 3, 2018 at 8:26 AM And donuts are yum like fry bread//Durn stuff goes to my head//and my belly//which turns to jelly//My 6 pack's a pudgin instead. BOGIE ON SHRINKING JACK!!! Jack Ellison February 3, 2018 at 8:45 AM Remember my donut days with a passion! Now chose to live free and flit through the days like a fairy!!!

Silent One February 3, 2018 at 6:28 AM Why do hypocrites piss on ya cornflakes? Then act like silly creepy snakes! Goodness sake give it a break, quit with being a fake. Be like Jack, eat lots of sweet cakes!! Jack Ellison February 3, 2018 at 8:37 AM Are you serious, after today's treat, no more!!! Awww!

Silent One February 3, 2018 at 6:23 AM Eat them quickly, then they wont! Or get some cornflakes lol. Jack Ellison February 3, 2018 at 8:36 AM That's it... you is one smart dude!!! lol