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Checking Out: One's Own Soul

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"I just knew there was brain cell in there somewhere" . . . ; )

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Rhapsodic impulses of skin suffused Exulted passions rendering, disused Intensely emotional of flushed amor A mere filament lisp of a lustful gore Susurration; within my own sad soul Mellifluous lullabies 'till I, rest whole

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/20/2019 10:52:00 AM
Hi Indiana the mind was focused on this one. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 11/20/2019 9:47:00 AM
Definitely more than a few brain cells. The sky is one whole, the water another; and between those two infinities, the soul of man is in loneliness... I'm with you...
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Date: 11/20/2019 8:14:00 AM
More than a few brain cells! Rapt by this one. xomo
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Date: 11/20/2019 7:55:00 AM
Very cool my friend. This definitely creates thought in the reader.
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