Check Out Time

When the motel decays,
gets weathered,
and the electricity frays,
when only one letter
on the marquee sign works;
when you're beleaguered by
the weight of the world 
on your shoulders;
when the loss of those close to you 
construed to isolate you,
to lionize you as the king of loneliness,
to inhibit your boldness,
when you're Savoie fair,
becomes inept among the masses;
and you're wit becomes
dull, and never passes;
these are the times
that try mens souls,
instead of being embraced
we’re left out in the cold;
so the situations prime,
it’s checkout time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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February 25, 2019 at 10:59 AM
Well written expressing the feelings of many, hope this is only a poem, if not suggest getting some help, take care. John
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