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Cheater Cheater

(to the tune of peter peter pumpkin eater)

Cheater cheater had to see her
Left work early to go and meet her
Banged her in a vacant house
And brought home herpes for his spouse


Received 7th place in "any poem you posted this week" contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

November 7, 2011 at 1:51 PM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Any Poem You Posted this Week"contest Susan. Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor

November 6, 2011 at 9:24 AM

Congrats, Sue. Excellent write. Nice going. Best to you and yours. xxxRalph

Poet Destroyer A

November 5, 2011 at 9:12 PM

SUSAN ;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my contest... I'm just dropping by to give everyone a warm congratulations and gratitude from the heart. ((you may get this comment more than once, if you entered more than one of my contest this week)) Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.

Bl Devnath

November 5, 2011 at 8:50 PM

Congratulation for win. Thanks, bl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 5, 2011 at 5:11 PM

Congrats Susan on another amazing win luv.. super awesome words once again..

Ilene Bauer

November 5, 2011 at 3:19 PM

clever and funny!

Bob Quigley

November 5, 2011 at 8:22 AM

Kind of says it all Susan. Congratulations on your win in PD's contest.

Andrea Dietrich

October 28, 2011 at 1:21 AM

just stopping by to say hi. Gotta hurry to bed. so I can at least get 6 hours!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 27, 2011 at 12:35 PM

Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments on my writing Susan. I enjoyed reading yours today. Love, Carol

Dinda Minardi

October 27, 2011 at 9:55 AM

hahaha... wittty, Susan... Thanks for making me smile this night :)

Lisa Cooper

October 26, 2011 at 6:47 PM

wow Susan nailed this one..... oops no pun (kin) intended lol

Carolyn Devonshire

October 26, 2011 at 11:54 AM

LOL That's a riot, Susan. Glad to see you went with humor too. I know it's not really funny when it happens, but it still made me laugh. Thanks for my placement in your contest. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

October 25, 2011 at 12:24 AM

hahaha. this is GREAT. I can just see myself playing this ditty on the piano. That is the only song i ever played on a piano. peter peter pumpkin eater!! (hmmm, I can think of another thing to say about a cheater with the word eat'er. heehee)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 24, 2011 at 9:22 PM

oh and it happens all too often.. u have stated it so very well Susan.. thankxx so very much for my placement ..glad u enjoyed my neighbor nemesis ..a true story..but now that we have moved... she is all gone for good luv.. yeah..