Chateau Pl

Chateau Pl

A sleep walk guided by reflections
Although somethings were real
Not the front entry way
Or the stair case
Or the garage for that matter
Scrubbed and alcohol swabbed shoes
Eating off those would've been though
Pee sitting down!
And cologne must not be detectable
From more than an arms length away!
Nobody wore it
I think
The closet could've clothed a small town
And housed an elderly couple with a Pomeranian
A parked Steinway on sleek marble
Or maybe it was a Bentley, whichever,
The keys were misplaced
Handshakes are forbidden!
You may speak, however.
A stolli over ice seemed to be the only thing
Not surreal
Unless you would fancy triple dipping
Beluga caviar with a vacuum in your hand surreal
Or, perhaps, being seduced by homemade egg noodles
Can you describe that atrocius smell?
A Land's End catalog doused in kerosene
Ties & cufflinks & Jackets on fire sale
A whiff of ozone
Darkness
A hazy stare assisted by chirping birds
and a gurgling salt water tank
In an upstairs, 2 bdr. duplex
A peon awakens a prince
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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April 26, 2015 at 3:13 PM
PS.. Brian, I want to thank you for taking your time, to add words on comment from when you first join the soup... LINDA
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April 27, 2015 at 7:48 AM
Hope you have a wonderful day Linda!
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April 26, 2015 at 2:57 PM
Brian, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
Martin Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 7:48 AM
Linda, Thank you! Your interest in my poetry is inspiring. I think your writing is incredible.
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April 26, 2015 at 1:19 AM
Brian, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Martin Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 7:45 AM
Hi Skat, Thank you for the well wishes and so sweet welcome. I look forward to reading your poetry as well. Until this year, my last attempt at poetry was 1995. It's a relief to have found a supportive community that will encourage, while being able to return the same. Hugs from your new friend.
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April 21, 2015 at 10:24 PM
Brian, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
Martin Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 9:25 AM
Hi Linda, I've read just a sampling in the last day.... and I have to say I'm a little awe struck. There is immense talent here. Look forward to growing. Thank you for your kind words.
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April 21, 2015 at 1:54 PM
- Hello Brian - I want to welcome you to the P-Soup - You have come to the right place, here you will find many talented poets :) - Share your work, try two get some "poets" friends :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Martin Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 6:04 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise for the warm welcome and smiles:) I am glad to be here. Looking forward to being apart of this community.
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