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Chasing Sandpipers and Gulls

I set up an easel in the shade of my beach umbrella. Wanting to paint by the morning light, I dabbed colors onto the palette...sea foam green, azure, titanium white, and ochre.

                                    With wetted brush in hand,
                                    I looked out, ready to begin.
                                    But there upon the golden sand,
                                    Ran my tomboy daughter, Quin.

    An only child, Quin had long ago found ways to amuse herself. Since the age of three she'd insisted on brushing her own hair into a ponytail, Now, at seven, she hadn't yet gotten the hang of it, but fly-a-way hair becomes my little tomboy. I smiled when I realized how much like Quin I was as a child. I watched as she chased gulls and sandpipers, clapping her hands to keep them flying ahead of her running steps.  A child of nature, she sees beauty in everything. She stopped and shielded her eyes against the rising sun with her hands. She watched the sandpipers land further up the beach then walked back to me.

                                "Mommy, do you think the birds
                                are afraid of me when I give chase?"
                                She waits to hear comforting words.
                                I smile, looking at her worried face.

    "Quin, my darling, if you think they are afraid, find something else
to do that won't scare them away."  She picked up her blue denim bag and skipped along the shore looking for starfish and sand dollars. I painted the scene I wanted to capture, but Quin became the focal point of my canvas. I used the green, blue, white, and ochre to paint what nature provided, but I used a shade called peony for the cheeks of my tomboy daughter.

                                        sandpipers and gulls
                                  Quin still loves making them fly
                                        with paint on canvas
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Koplin Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 3:13 PM
This is absolutely amazing my friend!! How beautiful and vibrant!! Awesome poetry!!! I just had to come back.
Vaso Avatar
May 8, 2024 at 9:44 AM
I second that!
Lane Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 5:28 PM
LOL Mark, thank you and come again. Too funny!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 9:06 AM
Wow, I love it. This was a joy to read.
Lane Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 5:27 PM
Hi, Rick and thanks very much for enjoying the read. Hope you've been well.
Rodgers Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 7:09 AM
Dear Lin, you have beautifully captured the essence of a tender moment between a mother and her spirited daughter. As I read, I felt the gentle rhythm of the waves and the warmth of the morning sun. Quin's innocence and curiosity shine through, echoing the natural wonder of childhood. I really loved how your portrayal of her simple joys amidst the coastal landscape is both heartwarming and evocative. I felt the invitation to share in the magic of the seaside scene. Lin, it is a wonderful glimpse into a mother's love and a child's wonder. - Blessings, my dear friend, Daniel
Lane Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 7:19 AM
Thank you for feeling the emotions I tried to portray in these lines. It's founded on memories of my daughter chasing pigeons at the Embarcadero in San Francisco. She'd been doing it for a few minutes then came to sit next to me and asked if she was doing something bad. I asked her if she thought chasing them was a bad thing. She thought about it for a minute, then nodded her head. She was 4 and never chased another bird.
Koplin Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 6:07 AM
This is great poetry, my friend.
Lane Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 7:16 AM
Thank you, Mark. It's nice to see you here, although it's not often enough.
Severo Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 10:50 PM
Very beautiful poetry, xoxo peace and love
Lane Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 7:16 AM
Thank you very much, Aurore. I wish the same peace and love to you.
Lawless Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 4:47 PM
Love this beach memory not washed away by the tides....brought back memories of sand castles, PBJ lunches, and frisbees...
Lane Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 4:51 PM
I’m happy to have sparked your Happy beach memories. Thank you, John.
Cunningham Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 1:35 PM
A brilliantly composed haibun Lin, you captured those precious moments well with your words. An enjoyable read. A fave from me. Tom
Lane Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 4:43 PM
Thank you for enjoying my Haubun and marking it as a fave, Tom. I appreciate you.
Daniel Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 9:16 AM
Excellent haibun, Lin:)
Lane Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 10:29 AM
Hi and thank you, Joanna.
Allison Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 8:38 AM
Wow what exquisite poetry lin, and you chose the most amazing picture to accompany your poem, I was very much a tomboy when I was growing up so can relate and to me this should be poem of the Year and a massive fave:-) hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 10:29 AM
I'm delighted that you liked both the poem and the photo. I wanted one exactly the way I pictured Quin in my mind. Thanks for asking me to post this one, Jan. Hugs.
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