Notes About The Poem

Big Foot, big feet, .....had no idea which way to go with this theme so I let the "muse on the loose".

Chasing Footprints

CHASING FOOTPRINTS

Some feet are bigger than others
none bigger than those
left by your brothers -
that you tried to fill.

The foot that Dad
would put “right up ‘ur ****”
and the one Mom said
you must put forward.

The meter and feet
we poetically treat
in attempt to conform
to rhythm and beat.

One foot we must
“take out of our mouth”,
while trying to get
“one foot in the door”.

Footprints that litter
the sands of our mind
that cannot be followed
by looking behind.

The foot of the stairs
the foot of the bed
the footsteps of night
the footsteps of dread.

Huge footprints of carbon
Al Gore and his ilk
charging the cows
for the grass to make milk.

One foot on the gas
One foot on the brake
one looking to give
one looking to take.

So don’t judge the size
or the depth of the root
nor measure the soul
by the size of the boot.

John G. Lawless 

submitted to – BIGFOOT (A Poet Destroyer contest)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Godwin Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 2:25 PM
I absolutely loved reading this, so sharp, clever, entertaining and beautifully done ... CayCay
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May 11, 2015 at 9:35 AM
I like the rhythm and rhyme in this one..Creative way to go in the contest ..I especially like the next to last stanza..Congrats on your win..Sara
Haight Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 2:58 PM
Hi John, back again to read your poem once more and to congratulations on your awesome First Place win! Sandra
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May 8, 2015 at 1:28 PM
Ps... I like the direction you took on your big foot poem. Most creative. So many feet to go aroun when thinking what's on the mind. Linda
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May 8, 2015 at 1:22 PM
Hi John, thank you for supporting the BigFoot Contest. I had fun sponsoring and hosting this contest theme. Stop by the big foot blog. Under my sissy's Skat blog, titled "Welcome to Poetry Soup's Big Foot Tour." Enjoy the pics if you'd like. Congrats to you, Congrats to all on the list. BigFoot ~A Poet Destroyers contest~ Always & forever <3 LINDA<3
Lawless Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 8:38 AM
Linda I stopped by and had a few chuckles with some of the pics
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May 8, 2015 at 12:44 PM
John, Congratulations on the bigfoot contest. Judged by Poet Destroyer (aka LINDA) ....... SKAT love
Lawless Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 8:37 AM
and thank you for your time and energy on the soup and for your continued support of my efforts.
Liquori Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 10:45 AM
John, Great poem and congratulations on your first place finish. This was an enjoyable read...
Roper Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 10:44 AM
My foot always ended in my mouth when I was younger, wisdom as I grew older turned the foot around and kept my mouth shut. Congratulations on your win, a 7. : ~ ) blessings Eve
Lawless Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 8:36 AM
Thank you Eve for your kind words and high mark. I try to use the mantra "there is nothing you can say that will not make the situation worse"....now always successfully
Allison Avatar
May 7, 2015 at 7:15 PM
Love your take on the theme John - congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
Lawless Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 8:34 AM
Thanks Jan
La France Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 9:53 AM
John, your poem is awesome in everyway, love it, a perfect 7, best of luck in the contest and I want to thank you so much for my wonderful placement in your Just Within Reach Contest, I am deeply honoured
Lawless Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 10:37 AM
Thanks for the high praise and high marks.
Ackerson Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 11:34 AM
I truly love this one, well done!
Lawless Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 10:36 AM
Thank you Mark
Laurie Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 8:00 PM
G'day John... a really good poem John full of life's lessons; with those we heed and those we should have heeded. Thanks John - Lindsay
Lawless Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 10:36 AM
Thank you Lindsay for taking the time to read and comment.
Smith Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 1:43 PM
This flowed right off the page John...fabulous Tim
Lawless Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 10:35 AM
Thanks Tim I had some fun playing with the theme.
Haight Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 10:19 AM
Amazing, John! I love this! Such an unique take on the theme! It's a winner for me! 7+Fav. Sandra
Lawless Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 12:17 PM
Thanks for your continuing support and high marks Sandra.
La France Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 7:59 AM
John, a delightful write, I so enjoyed reading it, well done 7, and best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, Patience
Lawless Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 12:15 PM
Thank you for the high mark and for stopping by to read.
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