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Big Foot, big feet, .....had no idea which way to go with this theme so I let the "muse on the loose".

CHASING FOOTPRINTS Some feet are bigger than others none bigger than those left by your brothers - that you tried to fill. The foot that Dad would put “right up ‘ur ****” and the one Mom said you must put forward. The meter and feet we poetically treat in attempt to conform to rhythm and beat. One foot we must “take out of our mouth”, while trying to get “one foot in the door”. Footprints that litter the sands of our mind that cannot be followed by looking behind. The foot of the stairs the foot of the bed the footsteps of night the footsteps of dread. Huge footprints of carbon Al Gore and his ilk charging the cows for the grass to make milk. One foot on the gas One foot on the brake one looking to give one looking to take. So don’t judge the size or the depth of the root nor measure the soul by the size of the boot. John G. Lawless submitted to – BIGFOOT (A Poet Destroyer contest)

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Date: 9/6/2016 2:25:00 PM
I absolutely loved reading this, so sharp, clever, entertaining and beautifully done ... CayCay
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Date: 5/11/2015 9:35:00 AM
I like the rhythm and rhyme in this one..Creative way to go in the contest ..I especially like the next to last stanza..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 5/8/2015 2:58:00 PM
Hi John, back again to read your poem once more and to congratulations on your awesome First Place win! Sandra
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Date: 5/8/2015 1:28:00 PM
Ps... I like the direction you took on your big foot poem. Most creative. So many feet to go aroun when thinking what's on the mind. Linda
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Date: 5/8/2015 1:22:00 PM
Hi John, thank you for supporting the BigFoot Contest. I had fun sponsoring and hosting this contest theme. Stop by the big foot blog. Under my sissy's Skat blog, titled "Welcome to Poetry Soup's Big Foot Tour." Enjoy the pics if you'd like. Congrats to you, Congrats to all on the list. BigFoot ~A Poet Destroyers contest~ Always & forever <3 LINDA<3
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John Lawless
Date: 5/10/2015 8:38:00 AM
Linda I stopped by and had a few chuckles with some of the pics
Date: 5/8/2015 12:44:00 PM
John, Congratulations on the bigfoot contest. Judged by Poet Destroyer (aka LINDA) ....... SKAT love
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John Lawless
Date: 5/10/2015 8:37:00 AM
and thank you for your time and energy on the soup and for your continued support of my efforts.
Date: 5/8/2015 10:45:00 AM
John, Great poem and congratulations on your first place finish. This was an enjoyable read...
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Date: 5/8/2015 10:44:00 AM
My foot always ended in my mouth when I was younger, wisdom as I grew older turned the foot around and kept my mouth shut. Congratulations on your win, a 7. : ~ ) blessings Eve
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John Lawless
Date: 5/10/2015 8:36:00 AM
Thank you Eve for your kind words and high mark. I try to use the mantra "there is nothing you can say that will not make the situation worse"....now always successfully
Date: 5/7/2015 7:15:00 PM
Love your take on the theme John - congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 5/10/2015 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Jan
Date: 4/21/2015 9:53:00 AM
John, your poem is awesome in everyway, love it, a perfect 7, best of luck in the contest and I want to thank you so much for my wonderful placement in your Just Within Reach Contest, I am deeply honoured
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John Lawless
Date: 4/21/2015 10:37:00 AM
Thanks for the high praise and high marks.
Date: 4/20/2015 11:34:00 AM
I truly love this one, well done!
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John Lawless
Date: 4/21/2015 10:36:00 AM
Thank you Mark
Date: 4/17/2015 8:00:00 PM
G'day John... a really good poem John full of life's lessons; with those we heed and those we should have heeded. Thanks John - Lindsay
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John Lawless
Date: 4/21/2015 10:36:00 AM
Thank you Lindsay for taking the time to read and comment.
Date: 4/17/2015 1:43:00 PM
This flowed right off the page John...fabulous Tim
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John Lawless
Date: 4/21/2015 10:35:00 AM
Thanks Tim I had some fun playing with the theme.
Date: 4/17/2015 10:19:00 AM
Amazing, John! I love this! Such an unique take on the theme! It's a winner for me! 7+Fav. Sandra
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John Lawless
Date: 4/17/2015 12:17:00 PM
Thanks for your continuing support and high marks Sandra.
Date: 4/17/2015 7:59:00 AM
John, a delightful write, I so enjoyed reading it, well done 7, and best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, Patience
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John Lawless
Date: 4/17/2015 12:15:00 PM
Thank you for the high mark and for stopping by to read.

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