chasing cars

one day, I saw a car going by
with my fourteen-year-old self in the driver's seat.
he wasn't even the one driving the car. 
it was hate that was driving the car,
fueling the car,
steering the car,
because the car was a vessel for the thoughts crammed in that trunk
which acts as the engine
the engine was in the back of the car.
that's right; it was the type of car that goes really fast
except when you're stuck in traffic
then you're on the same speed as everyone else.
but there was no traffic
there was nothing stopping the car
the car traveled at the speed of light,
but you see, the thing with traveling at the speed of light,
is that it's hard to stop, easy to lose control,
and time flies away with you,
no matter how little you enjoy the ride.

one day, I was passing by a car wreck
two cars of the same type,
same color,
same age,
the hoods perfectly crushed into each other
the windshields making contact
and I looked at the boy from earlier,
and saw that he had aged four years.
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Diderot Avatar
April 10, 2024 at 8:35 PM
...nothing worse than being stuck in traffic; some say you have to be careful traveling at the speed of Light. Car wrecks and their merkabahs. I continue to read your poems. This one quite deep, with layered meanings that expand. I like it very much on many levels.
Agustin Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 5:59 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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