Sandra Adams Poet Free verse

Chasing After Thoughts

this wind
allures
thoughts 

adrift
in the rift
visions
of you
chasing me
playfully
through the field

laying me down
in the pause
of breathless 
moments
until we rise
in the next 
rhythmic pulse
of breath

like these leaves
still blushed
scurrying along
in the drift
of this wind

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Bobby May November 20, 2019 at 8:38 PM OH MY GOSH, what a talent you have, I just fell in love with every word you wrote!! Amazing my friend and breath taking! Sandra Adams November 20, 2019 at 8:43 PM Thank you Bobby... this was one of my bus scribbles, i sit at the park and enjoy the sites of nature...today the wind was tossing the leaves about... :) hugs

Line Gauthier November 20, 2019 at 8:07 PM Beautiful, Sandra. Sandra Adams November 20, 2019 at 8:41 PM Thank you so much Line... hugs :)

Gershon Wolf November 20, 2019 at 6:00 PM Yes! Like the windswept leaves... of love and lovers. Once again, enchanting imagery, my friend. Warmest wishes, Gershon Sandra Adams November 20, 2019 at 6:54 PM Thank you Gershon...my bus scribbles will get boring when the winter arrives... hugs :)

Pax Geist November 20, 2019 at 5:35 PM Quite persuasive observations, the wind does help to sway sensations.... nice reflection of your day. :) Sandra Adams November 20, 2019 at 6:53 PM Thank you so much Pax :) hugs

Ralph Sergi November 20, 2019 at 5:09 PM A romp in the fields blending nature with love. Enchanting,Sandra! Sandra Adams November 20, 2019 at 6:51 PM Thank you so much Ralph... :)

Gordon Mcconnell November 20, 2019 at 4:15 PM A lovely piece Sandy, with a title that paints such a vivid picture of our mind. Blessings and hugs,Gordon Sandra Adams November 20, 2019 at 6:50 PM Thank you so very much Gordon :) hugs

Vijay Pandit November 20, 2019 at 3:33 PM Alluring winds adorn your thoughts my friend--playful sounds and glimpse of love--well written, as always, Sandy. Sandra Adams November 20, 2019 at 6:50 PM Thank you so much my friend....i try to keep a good imagination, somedays it's sad tones, other days not... hugs :)

Chris Green November 20, 2019 at 2:24 PM I'm not even sure what to say anymore, your poetry leaves me breathless. I could see this entire scene so playful and fun and filled with love. The soft breeze of your words has captured this heart today. Sandra Adams November 20, 2019 at 2:38 PM Wow. What a kind thing to say... the wind is strong today. The leaves were scurrying along in pairs my mind got creative. Glad you liked my little bus scribble, thank you so much my friend :) hugs