Chasing A Dream

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Chasing a dream, she peddles her body and dresses sexy, though never gaudy. Catering to upper society, high-priced call girls project propriety. Easily enticed by riches, she yearns, sex fuels the flames as innocence burns. And selling favors for dollars and fame, she pimps herself; it's all part of the game. When paper passions and desires unfold; sex isn't intimate; it is something sold. And words of sincerity ring hollow amidst phony smiles; men pay to follow. Tomorrows cannot be freely explored, for feelings are subdued when love is whored. And abandoning family and friends, circumventing objections; she pretends. Reality exasperates her plight, piercing awareness like slivers of light. And, anguish slowly envelopes her soul, for her lifestyle levies a heavy toll.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 5/23/2018 1:39:00 PM
Great poem about living on the edge, Emile.
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Date: 4/3/2017 8:53:00 AM
I think that is why so many get hooked on drugs. They just want that numb feeling because they are trapped. You express their torture well Emile. There is so much abuse in this world...of both sexes sadly. 7 ; )
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Date: 4/3/2017 9:29:00 AM
Thanks Connie, you are right...their is both danger and excitement in the sex trade, and it attracts many of our youth, Emile.
Date: 4/2/2017 12:44:00 AM
This is so true and how life is for this poor young woman, sadly a lot of these women fall into prostitution and what for, all to earn a dollar and sadly these women are targets for drugs and murder, you have addressed this problem very well Emile, love it.....Take care........Vera
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Date: 4/2/2017 9:42:00 AM
Thank you very much Vera, for your support, it is appreciated, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2017 7:53:00 AM
You have addressed a truth with this poem that is very important to acknowledge , Emile. Well done.
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Date: 4/1/2017 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Heidi, your comments are most welcome, Emile.
Date: 3/31/2017 10:59:00 PM
A tragic,sad journey for this woman that is a reality in today's world not talked about nearly enough. Your poem is a great beginning. Thoughtful and expressive writing. Very well done :-) blessings xx
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Date: 4/1/2017 8:55:00 AM
Thank you very much for your support Lynn, it is appreciated, Emile.
Date: 3/31/2017 2:36:00 PM
- A really well described life for this young woman - Sad but true, Emile - Well done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/31/2017 7:23:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, your comments are always welcome, Emile.
Date: 3/31/2017 2:21:00 PM
Dark and sad Emile but wonderfully expressed. You have painted the scene vividly with your poetic phrasing. Nicely done.
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Date: 3/31/2017 7:22:00 PM
Thanks Chris, your comments are most welcome, Emile.
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