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Chase a Yellow Poem

I caught a yellow poem in my hands, and it fluttered like a frighten flock of butterfly wings Spreading its yellow bright wings, Then gliding across a sea of gold, we landed gently as a ripple on the pond If yellow is the brightest color in the rainbow, then, let me chase a yellow poem -- through your candlelight If we land with both feet on the ground, I wonder, why we could not catch a yellow butterfly smile today

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Date: 3/15/2009 5:42:00 AM
A well deserved feature this week. I feel yellow. Great flow. Randy
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Date: 3/11/2009 2:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Gregory. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/11/2009 9:53:00 AM
Congrats Gregory on "Chase A Yellow Poem" being featured. Vince
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Date: 3/9/2009 5:11:00 PM
Well, you've surely put one on my face with this wonderful write, Gregory. Great choice to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/9/2009 12:05:00 PM
Gregory - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! Very well deserved. Peace always, John
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Date: 3/9/2009 6:47:00 AM
Oh I love this!! It makes me feel all sunshiney and happy :) and the style and imagery used is just perfect. I also really like how you compared the poem to a butterfly, just beautiful. It's going into my favs. :) Congrats on your feature! Love, Amy
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Date: 3/9/2009 6:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/8/2009 6:05:00 PM
Gregory the imagery of this poem was excellent - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 3/8/2009 5:48:00 PM
Nice use of color and imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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