Charmed,Sold,Taken

A Knock on the door and 
my eyes awoken
I stared at the ceiling for 
a minute or two
My bones refused to get 
up to open
Louder and louder I think 
it knew this too

Battle in my head I could 
barely think
I walked to the door like I 
was broken
Reached for the 
knob and lungs filled 
with 
matter,heavy and thick
Three shots of tequila 
was all I had taken

I opened the door as if 
on a mission
Nice polished shoes,black 
pants and shirt nicely 
ironed too
Tray in hand,his words of 
concern for my isolation
Danced out of my ear 
with obvious jubilation

One look was all I needed 
to be taken
By those luscious lips and 
charming infectious eyes 
too
Matter forgotten as I was 
lost in those eyes that 
seemed like heaven
One look and I was 
sold,one look and I was 
taken 

For the 'Taken' contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Terdue Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 6:53 AM
I think you were not thinking what you think am thinking now. What a wonderful piece, and sadly too, you were not referring to me! I love this piece, best of luck.
Duncan Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 2:39 PM
I really like the way you played this out, nice job Iveren,,, thank you for reading my Family Hair ;} a wish for your win .
Mongold Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 2:34 PM
Great entry in to the contest my friend, nice rhymes and great content, kudos! Curt
Manassian Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 1:16 PM
Lovely write! :) ...the luscious lips....hmmmmm...enticing! ;)
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