Charmaine's Wee One

Charmaine is the sweetest young lady But her wee one's been driving her crazy She can't keep up It's overflowing her cup She's really not getting a lot of sleep lately © Jack Ellison 2015
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Callus Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 11:19 AM
A delightful write, Jack; Charmaine is one of my favourite lady poets on Soup; she has a clever and romantic muse that keeps her good company:) // paul
Ellison Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 11:22 AM
She is a very special lady with a softness of heart... she is loved by many!!! Jack
Hopper Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 7:35 AM
Cute, sweet! I feel her pain!
Ellison Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 7:44 AM
Thanks for dropping by Anna... huggsies, Jack xx
Manassian Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 1:43 PM
:) Love Charmaine. Her wee one is going to be one sweet lady if she turns out like her Mama. Lovely post, Kenny. You are sweetness personified. Hugs
Ellison Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 1:46 PM
You two guys have long entered my heart and set up residence! Love ya Betty Boop! xxx
Eastman Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 10:48 AM
Hey! Charlmaine... Don't despair... Yes, We've again got rent a Dragon... Just beware... He might teach someone... To learn to potty on your roses... Giggle! Sorry... Springs here and the Devil is in me!... I can't seem to behave! Honest! It'll get better... NOT! LOL
Chircop Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 5:07 PM
: )..She potties on the floor too..lol: )Oops
Eastman Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 12:36 PM
Look at Dragon's and my cute sad little eyes... Maybe then you'll forgive us... Tho the offer still stands... Giggle!
Ellison Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 11:05 AM
Charmaine is going through what we all go through... now she knows!!! LOL xxx
Allison Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 9:33 AM
ha ha ha Jack I can see Charma was charmed by this write:-) Hugs jan xx
Ellison Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 9:41 AM
Whatta sweetie eh! She IS having a bit of a tough time with her wee one though! I know what that can cause! Hugs, Jack xxx
Chircop Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 8:18 AM
Lol : )..How did you know Santa ? : )..Yes the wee one is a handful..Im hoping when she starts school in October.She d settle down..Eventually i ll miss her needing for me i know : ).A sweet lovely tanka..To my fvs :.)
Ellison Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 8:27 AM
Dear Charmaine, you are one of the shining stars here on the old Soup! You're loved by everyone and of course that means me as well! Happy you like it, dear one... huggsies, your forever friend, Jack xxx
Smith Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 7:59 AM
Excellent.... I know the feeling well...as they get older you miss it.....
Ellison Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 8:11 AM
Strange eh! We're never satisfied eh! Thanks my friend!
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