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Charm Pink

Charm pink upon the horizon Steel blue clouds many shapes Ripe pears 'pon the soft dew touched ground Life has good no mistake A dog and cat sit in my lap Cat's claws a source of pain Nothing compared to what He felt From the thorns His crown contained My life has been blessed by His gift When He came to redeem A lose and perverse humanity And gain back man's esteem The Mockingbird chatters nearby Those roosters crow at play Today is like many others Could He call His church today

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Date: 9/10/2013 2:48:00 PM
Your verses fill my heart with so much serenity Sara dear.Pls do send my regards to Doris..I miss her and her lovely posts.Tnks for stopping by my magnolia poem : )
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Date: 9/7/2013 1:44:00 PM
There is such a sense of peace in this lovely poem! Nicely done!
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Date: 9/6/2013 2:04:00 PM
love this, Sara - especially liked the comparison to your cat's claws and the thorns
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Date: 9/6/2013 11:41:00 AM
WOW VERY BEAUTIFUL
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Date: 9/6/2013 10:26:00 AM
A lovely poem, Sara. With all the craziness going on in the world today, I believe He'll be coming soon! Love, Kim
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Date: 9/6/2013 6:41:00 AM
This is a good question, could he call his church today? I doubt there are many churches that are prepared for his calling, too bad really! I know this is a little thing, but I really like how you capitalize He and His within your poem, a lot of people don't! I really loved reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a terrific piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/6/2013 5:41:00 AM
- Beautiful poem with the word of the day ...... heaven beautiful shades, Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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