Charlieku - With a Twist

daybreak horizons sound the alarm awaken false dawn ©10/12/2018 for – Charlieku 4-3-2 poetry contest

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Date: 10/24/2018 8:30:00 PM

John, congratulations on your great win in this Haiku contest.. great imagery

Date: 10/23/2018 11:53:00 PM

Great seeing this one again as I peruse the winner list. Congrats, John

Date: 10/23/2018 2:35:00 PM

Love the clever twist on the Charlieku, many congrats John:-) hugs jan xx

John Lawless
Date: 10/23/2018 4:21:00 PM

Jan, I have often been accused of being a "bit twisted" over the years. Thanks for stopping by

Date: 10/23/2018 10:33:00 AM

Congrats on your win, John.

John Lawless
Date: 10/23/2018 4:20:00 PM

Thanks Line, it seemed a bit of tight contest, glad to have placed

Date: 10/23/2018 2:23:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great Charlieku, John :) - Have a nice Tuesday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Lawless
Date: 10/23/2018 4:19:00 PM

Thank you anne-Lise

Date: 10/14/2018 3:11:00 PM

gosh, I just gotta finally see what this form is all about becuase yours looks nothing like the other i just saw. Great write!

John Lawless
Date: 10/23/2018 4:17:00 PM

Well Andrea, I often epitomize the statement "Oh, look a my Johnny, he's the only one in the parade that's in step.".

Date: 10/13/2018 10:50:00 AM

Oh! I see what you did here! I kept seeing the "charlieku" poems so I finally went to the contests page to see what it's about. Nice twist!

John Lawless
Date: 10/23/2018 4:15:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by Becca, and sorry for the delay in responding I've been battling "the bug" for over a week.