Charisma

“The villains were always ugly in books and movies. Necessarily so, it seemed. Because if they were attractive—if their looks matched their charm and their cunning—they wouldn't only be dangerous. They would be irresistible.”
Nenia Campbell, Horrorscape


Be leery of the person 
whose charm can be deceptive.
To this person do not be
overly receptive!

A man who’s always giving
compliments and praise
sometimes is a devil.
With people’s minds he plays.

Most people know the stories
of Ted Bundy, handsome man.
Behind all his charisma
he had a master plan.

With a smile on his face,
he lured each hapless female
he murdered mercilessly.
He twice escaped from jail!

Another man who practiced
charisma was so sly!
On a little girl named Jan
this monster had his eye.

He made friends with her family
and ruined poor Jan’s life,
seducing that kid’s father
and the father’s wife!

Yes, both the young girl’s parents
were under this man’s spell.
And that’s why he was able
to groom their daughter well.

He kidnapped Jan and tortured her.
He had the whole town fooled!
The parents, falling for his tricks,
were later ridiculed.

A person with charisma
might be a sociopath.
Take care to never be led down
this monster’s wicked path.

Feb. 3, 2023
For Writing Challenge - C Words - Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
Inspired by documentaries on Ted Bundy and a recent series called "A Friend of the Family"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
February 9, 2023 at 3:33 PM
Andrea, wonderful write and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - C Words, well done and I like the quote, Constance
Baker Avatar
February 9, 2023 at 7:44 AM
Good advice and weel written bio on Bundy. Sounds like a winner to me, Andrea. Write On! Bill
Romios Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 2:14 PM
Congratulations, Andrea. Good show, girl. Five star rating ***** There are even quite a few on this site. Sweet and smiling..yet stabbing you in the back Being trusting, I attract them. Yuck. My problem, not theirs.
Walker Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 2:21 AM
Well written, great rhythm for such a monstrous evil.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 9:18 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write/story. Watch out for "A person with charisma" for they could be a monster. Have a blessed day..............
Daniel Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 7:03 PM
We sure must be careful, well written, Andrea:) congratulations:)
Ferry Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 7:54 AM
Well written A lot of monsters out there
Y. Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 7:56 AM
WoW! Andrea, You penned well written poem for contest. I agree, we must be aware charismatic person. They could be a “ Ted Bundy. I wish you the contest. PS, how are you my friend? I hope your New Year is going well so far. Have a good weekend:-) Alexis
Pandit Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 6:18 AM
Things aren't always as they seem to be. An important reminder for all. Best to you, Andrea.
Hawley Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 5:29 AM
That is a little bit story telling/educational. Nice read.
Buhagiar Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 10:46 PM
Nothing worse than a supposed hero planning his evil deeds. Best for a win.
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