Mohan Chutani Poet Verse

Chariots of Gods

Angkor temples 
reveal old paths 
of god borne ‘raths’ 
came from lands far 

gods, goddesses 
guard the altar
keep demons far 
people at peace 


'raths'- chariots in Hindi language

Mohan Chutani
Contest: Ride on a Pathya Va
Theme of Chariots of gods from far (India)
Date:7.8.2014

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Casarah Nance August 11, 2014 at 6:25 PM Oh that is amazing! well done!

Debbie Guzzi August 11, 2014 at 2:57 PM Feel right! I'd love to hear nette or you read one in the proper language? I wish we could put up audio files! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 11, 2014 at 5:46 AM Congrats on ur winning awesome write Mohan! Mohan Chutani August 11, 2014 at 6:39 AM Thanks Upma.

Nette Onclaud August 10, 2014 at 11:09 AM mystical piece that honors the spirit.. i have seen the angkor vat temples and felt this experience of which you speak, mohan... thanks for supporting my contest and huge cheers on your high win.. huggs Mohan Chutani August 11, 2014 at 6:38 AM Thanks Nette for my placement in your contest and continuous encouragement of my poetry. My experience of Angkor Vat temples was quite good - a great heritage area depicting a great mythological past. Mohan