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Charging Around

A giggle and screech filled pond on the crushed gravel path a sheen of sweat forming on my medditeranian nut browned skin; waylayed was I by a hitch-hiker. The gnat maintained a steady oribit about the circumferance of my head, wether held there by some unknown power or the monumental magnetic magnitude of my brain; none will ever know. Arms swinging at a frantic pace it seems impossible to believe my pinwheeling form was unable to dislodge this bugger, keeping a geosynchronous orbit around my noggin. Yet, the likelihood of a tag team of insectoid astronauts seemed slim. As the silken breeze went weaving amongst the pines and rustling withing the pond weeds armies of these pin pricks of horror swarm attending summer clad fishermen, beet red two year olds and there hippopotomus shaped mothers in the drink. The doldrums of August have begun in earnest, as the black flies decend, probing their universe, persistant and provoking as the humans they oribit.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/4/2009 4:42:00 PM
again with the mosquitoes!! oh wait they're black flies, not as bad. where do you live anyway? with all these swamps and flies and nats I'm picturing Louisiana or Florida, unless the Mediterranean reference is supposed to clue me in...love the monumental magnetic magnitude line, made me chuckle almost as much as the geosynchronous orbit. technically I think that means the earth is spinning at the same speed as the satellite so you'd have to be twirling at the same speed as the fly there:)
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Date: 7/31/2009 3:26:00 PM
@.@ oh dear this is incredible!!!=) love the images, the way you describe what seems to be twisting around you jojojooj =) hippos=D=D=D thanks a lot for the experience xD I love hippos =D
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Date: 7/31/2009 6:37:00 AM
persistant and provoking as the humans they orbit...intriguing and yet so true...thank you for your detailed comments on my poem,they are well appreciated...Kris
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Date: 7/30/2009 4:39:00 PM
awwwwww this is epic keep writing about nature...i have a part 3 series about the stage of a butterfly you should read it, its called larvae, cocoon, ans butterfly
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Date: 7/30/2009 1:39:00 PM
Very descriptive of a terrible bug. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 7/30/2009 12:50:00 PM
Loved this unusual take on a summer swimming pond....those pesky critters that like to spoil the perfection of those serene surroundings...isn't it the truth!!
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