Charging Around

A giggle and screech filled pond
on the crushed gravel path 
a sheen of sweat forming 
on my medditeranian nut browned skin;
waylayed was I by a hitch-hiker. 

The gnat maintained a steady oribit
about the circumferance of my head,
wether held there by some unknown power
or the monumental magnetic magnitude of my brain;
none will ever know.

Arms swinging at a frantic pace
it seems impossible to believe my pinwheeling form
was unable to dislodge this bugger, 
keeping a geosynchronous orbit around my noggin.
Yet, the likelihood of a tag team 
of insectoid astronauts seemed slim.

As the silken breeze went weaving amongst 
the pines and rustling withing the pond weeds
armies of these pin pricks of horror swarm
attending summer clad fishermen, beet red two year olds
and there hippopotomus shaped mothers in the drink.

The doldrums of August have begun in earnest,
as the black flies decend, probing their universe,
persistant and provoking as the humans they oribit.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dvorkis Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 4:42 PM
again with the mosquitoes!! oh wait they're black flies, not as bad. where do you live anyway? with all these swamps and flies and nats I'm picturing Louisiana or Florida, unless the Mediterranean reference is supposed to clue me in...love the monumental magnetic magnitude line, made me chuckle almost as much as the geosynchronous orbit. technically I think that means the earth is spinning at the same speed as the satellite so you'd have to be twirling at the same speed as the fly there:)
Cantu Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 3:26 PM
@.@ oh dear this is incredible!!!=) love the images, the way you describe what seems to be twisting around you jojojooj =) hippos=D=D=D thanks a lot for the experience xD I love hippos =D
Kern Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 6:37 AM
persistant and provoking as the humans they orbit...intriguing and yet so true...thank you for your detailed comments on my poem,they are well appreciated...Kris
Keen Avatar
July 30, 2009 at 4:39 PM
awwwwww this is epic keep writing about nature...i have a part 3 series about the stage of a butterfly you should read it, its called larvae, cocoon, ans butterfly
Kendrick Avatar
July 30, 2009 at 1:39 PM
Very descriptive of a terrible bug. Keep writing. Sara
Richards Avatar
July 30, 2009 at 12:50 PM
Loved this unusual take on a summer swimming pond....those pesky critters that like to spoil the perfection of those serene surroundings...isn't it the truth!!
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