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Chapel of Flowers

our trees have blossomed, and some have knots in their yokes, like one in my throat..... fragile limbs look down and weep to acknowledge my despair ................................................................ "Tanka Tears" Contest: Sponsored By Rick Parise 2/10/15

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Date: 2/12/2015 12:10:00 PM
Carrie, your poem is so lovely, so visual and sweet as I look out my window at mountains of pure white snow, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~
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Date: 2/12/2015 3:04:00 AM
Ah yes my friend...How I identify with THIS. You never cease to amaze. I think you've got a winner here...Thanks SO much for taking the time to read my three-part Narrative and for the encouraging comment...I never thought of making it into a short story! - Tim
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Date: 2/11/2015 1:44:00 PM
My dear poetic friend; you must be forlorn, to write in such a way ! Cheer up sweet Carrie.........spring is just around the corner, and your thoughts will be bubbling over with mirth ! ;) It is always a pleasure to read you, have a blessed week.............much love, james
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Date: 2/10/2015 10:21:00 PM
Sad, but lovely
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Date: 2/10/2015 9:54:00 PM
So touching write.Lovely Tanka.
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