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Chapel Bells

~The Chapels bells are ringing Best man’s hands holds Wedding rings While the groom nervously squirms Bride walks in love’s march ~ ~Anticipation awaits Faithful seal of love in spite Passions need a Saint’s patience Not Consummation John Moses Freeman For and in Honor of DR Ram And contest: Wedding Rehearsal,

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/18/2011 7:35:00 AM

yeah, moe.. keep on trucking and wonderful congrats to you! :) huggs

Tahera Mannan

Date: 5/18/2011 6:16:00 AM

So true Moses. This is lovely. Many congrats for this win.

Gautami Phookan

Date: 5/18/2011 2:48:00 AM

Such beautiful Dodoitsus they're..loved the title "Chapel Bells"..Congrats John on your wonderful win...gautami

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/17/2011 5:26:00 PM

John- Spoken like a true premarital counselor in this winning write! A saint's patience is essential-as you wrote, consummation, not as important! Congrats- Gwendolen

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/17/2011 5:17:00 PM

Congrad's on your win John and thanks for the kind comment on mine. Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/17/2011 1:54:00 PM

So happy to see you ranking high, John. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/17/2011 1:06:00 PM

Congrats Moses on your wonderful win in Wedding Rehearsal contest with this dynamic poem my friend.. amazing as always luv..enjoy another treasured win..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/17/2011 12:41:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in Dr. Ram's contest Moses. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/17/2011 11:52:00 AM

Congratulations on the third place win in my contest, John

Manouchka Doreus

Date: 5/16/2011 9:40:00 AM

wow... beautiful... good luck

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/8/2011 6:45:00 PM

you captured it well John! Good luck in this contest and thanks alot for the kudos! I appreciate it.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/5/2011 7:49:00 PM

Just wanted to thank you for your kind comments, John. I'm hoping you do well in this contest and that you are coping with the struggles of life right now. So much has happened in the past two days. Perhaps we can catch up this weekend. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/4/2011 6:30:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, john

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/4/2011 2:54:00 PM

Hey, that was an excellent route to take for the topic, John. I really like your entry! Luv, andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/2/2011 5:17:00 AM

It does take the patience of a saint to wait until after the nuptials to consumate the marriage, John. Well said! Winning wishes for you in Dr. Ram's contest. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/1/2011 8:45:00 AM

Thanks for the entry, John

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/1/2011 3:38:00 AM

so well-crafted, moe... enjoyed the mood of anticipation here... just great! .. wininning's best to you! :) huggs, nette

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/30/2011 7:39:00 PM

nice... John.. good luck in the contest..p.d.