John Freeman Poet Dodoitsu

Chapel Bells

~The Chapels bells are ringing
   Best man’s hands holds Wedding rings
   While the groom nervously squirms
   Bride walks in love’s march
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~Anticipation awaits
   Faithful seal of love in spite 
   Passions need a Saint’s patience
   Not Consummation

   John Moses Freeman
   For and in Honor of DR Ram
   And contest: Wedding Rehearsal,

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Nette Onclaud May 18, 2011 at 7:35 AM yeah, moe.. keep on trucking and wonderful congrats to you! :) huggs

Tahera Mannan May 18, 2011 at 6:16 AM So true Moses. This is lovely. Many congrats for this win.

Gautami Phookan May 18, 2011 at 2:48 AM Such beautiful Dodoitsus they're..loved the title "Chapel Bells"..Congrats John on your wonderful win...gautami

Gwendolen Song May 17, 2011 at 5:26 PM John- Spoken like a true premarital counselor in this winning write! A saint's patience is essential-as you wrote, consummation, not as important! Congrats- Gwendolen

Debbie Guzzi May 17, 2011 at 5:17 PM Congrad's on your win John and thanks for the kind comment on mine. Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire May 17, 2011 at 1:54 PM So happy to see you ranking high, John. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 17, 2011 at 1:06 PM Congrats Moses on your wonderful win in Wedding Rehearsal contest with this dynamic poem my friend.. amazing as always luv..enjoy another treasured win..

Carol Sunshine Brown May 17, 2011 at 12:41 PM Congratulations on the win in Dr. Ram's contest Moses. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta May 17, 2011 at 11:52 AM Congratulations on the third place win in my contest, John

Manouchka Doreus May 16, 2011 at 9:40 AM wow... beautiful... good luck

Robert A. Dufresne May 8, 2011 at 6:45 PM you captured it well John! Good luck in this contest and thanks alot for the kudos! I appreciate it.

Carolyn Devonshire May 5, 2011 at 7:49 PM Just wanted to thank you for your kind comments, John. I'm hoping you do well in this contest and that you are coping with the struggles of life right now. So much has happened in the past two days. Perhaps we can catch up this weekend. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta May 4, 2011 at 6:30 PM Thanks for the entry, john

Andrea Dietrich May 4, 2011 at 2:54 PM Hey, that was an excellent route to take for the topic, John. I really like your entry! Luv, andrea

Carolyn Devonshire May 2, 2011 at 5:17 AM It does take the patience of a saint to wait until after the nuptials to consumate the marriage, John. Well said! Winning wishes for you in Dr. Ram's contest. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta May 1, 2011 at 8:45 AM Thanks for the entry, John

Nette Onclaud May 1, 2011 at 3:38 AM so well-crafted, moe... enjoyed the mood of anticipation here... just great! .. wininning's best to you! :) huggs, nette

Poet Destroyer A April 30, 2011 at 7:39 PM nice... John.. good luck in the contest..p.d.