Chaotic Cloud

Swirling round and round heading down.
Straight and out I cannot see.
Confusion and cloudiness blurry the way.
Swirling round and round heading down.
Mindlessly dancing round the day.
Fixing a gaze of the path of the confused.
Swirling round and round and heading down.
Straight and out I cannot see.

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Date: 2/19/2023 11:08:00 AM
I like this, but let me tell you something in soupmail.
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Date: 11/23/2022 4:10:00 PM
I see you're trying some different fprms, Miranda. Variety is the spice of life. :-) Have a great week, my friend. Bill
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 11/23/2022 5:18:00 PM
I really am trying to learn new types of poetry to write. This website is really amazing at teaching. I might as well use it and grow.
Date: 11/15/2022 11:00:00 AM
Cataract surgery next! Aloha!
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 11/15/2022 11:09:00 AM
I mean maybe.
Date: 11/14/2022 8:19:00 PM
Tantalising poetry, Miranda. Walking in mist or fog, never easy. Like this...Harry
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 11/15/2022 3:59:00 AM
Thank you for the reply and I am glad you like it.
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