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Chaos On the Causeway

A catastrophic collision Caused by two careering cars Created chaos on the causeway Crumpling chrome and carbon parts The chime of crunching metal The clash of clanging swords The scream of screeching rubber Echoed through the mountains gorge Two opposing forces Starting distance equal breadth Sped head long into the canyon Meeting chaos causing death

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/6/2014 3:07:00 PM
Hi Rory - love the alliteration and the awesome imagery. Great write which I enjoyed reading. Well done.
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Date: 5/20/2014 12:49:00 PM
Rory nice alliteration in this, constructed well...David
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Date: 5/8/2014 10:06:00 PM
An excellent poem, Rory! Enjoyed the perfect imagery creating a "front row" seat at the site. Thank you for visiting my page and have a great weekend! Annalise
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