Chaos of the Heart

holding hands ....

infinity seemed elusive

breathing the dry desert
sage air together

thoughts of forever,
wandering alone

.... together
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Peranteau Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 7:35 AM
Mr. Goff,...today I've been spending my morning reading poems I've saved in mine fav's,..I came acrossed this one,..wow,..the instinct feeling I get reading this poem,..I remember now why I saved this gem ! Awesome write Sir ! james
Guzzi Avatar
November 14, 2009 at 12:52 PM
alone.....together so romantic! Light & Love and do I have CONCRETE from you (tickle)
Nieves Avatar
September 25, 2009 at 2:39 PM
Good job, Goff.
Peranteau Avatar
August 30, 2009 at 8:08 AM
Beautiful poetry Mr. Goff ! I love the romance and the quick way you brought two souls together !! Awesome,..In my favs Sir ! james
Delacroix Avatar
August 30, 2009 at 8:08 AM
Yes, that is chaos of the heart. A memory? a wish? Uncertainty? A little sad, but well written and leaving the reader wondering, but the heart needs to find peace, and you will. Thanks for sharing and again thank you for reading my poetry. Best wishes, Caroline.
George   Avatar
August 30, 2009 at 5:57 AM
Dear James, You have painted a very beautiful serene yet somehow melancoly image in my mind. Thank you for sharing. Lainie
Null Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 10:16 PM
How sweet, luv it....Karla
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