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Chaos and Order- Tormented

My head hurts really bad, it's much turmoil in my mind I don't know what’s real or fake, I long for peace Some days I’m really scared like someone is chasing me Everything is jumbled and mixed up, I want to be free I take what the doctor prescribed and I wait It takes a while for me to feel somewhat better When it kicks in my life is tolerable, it has order Inspired by Nette's Contest: Choas And Order 1-28-17

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Winged Warrior

Date: 2/2/2017 2:28:00 PM

Congrats!!! Alexis...a 'chaos' of the mind...most frightening...very well done...god bless...^WW^

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 2/1/2017 5:43:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your deep verse, Alexis. Congrats for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)

Shilpa Chaganti

Date: 2/1/2017 1:03:00 PM

Kudos on the win.. :) Alexis The relief after the tormenting pain is so much relatable...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/1/2017 12:57:00 PM

a realistic look at emotional disruption which finds comfort through health care... great artwords, alexis...cheers to you on your win and thanks for coming around.. huggs

Alexis Y.
Date: 2/1/2017 2:49:00 PM

Hi Nette, It was my pleasure to participate in your contest. Thanks for my placement:-) Alexis

Joseph May

Date: 2/1/2017 9:51:00 AM

Congrats on your win Alexis

Alexis Y.
Date: 2/1/2017 12:50:00 PM

Hi Joseph, Thanks for coming by to congratulate me. Congratulations to you too:-) Alexis

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/31/2017 11:02:00 PM

Great take on the contest. Congrats.

Alexis Y.
Date: 2/1/2017 12:51:00 PM

Hi Richard, Thanks for coming by to congratulate me. Congratulations on your top win:-) Alexis

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/30/2017 5:22:00 PM

A cool anti-everyone-gets-a-trophy poem, Alexis. A nice kick-in-the-head when those meds kick in. Sometimes, pain is a person's portion of living. Pray to God that He gives you a high tolerance threshold for pain. This poem is a 7 and a fave. Cool double combo for this tasty treat. Love and more love to you, dear.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 1/30/2017 11:55:00 AM

Yes life has both chaos and order as this poem combines the hard times with the better positively and sighing at the same time. Thumbs up for how u express it. That should cheer up. Nice to read from your pen again , I hope u will too my latest. And hapy new yr.

Chris Green

Date: 1/30/2017 11:00:00 AM

This one hurt to read my friend. Though, form what I know about the contest, it seems perfect to me for the theme because it cries loudly of chaos but finds peace when order is restored. Good luck Alexis.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/30/2017 5:49:00 AM

Dramatic but beautifully done dear, Alexis! A big seven!

Joseph May

Date: 1/28/2017 1:52:00 PM

Very nicely penned Alexis...best wishes

Winged Warrior

Date: 1/28/2017 1:26:00 PM

Everyone has his or her 'Heavens and Hells' of mind...hopefully, yours leans more toward the Heavens...great write Alexis...god bless my friend...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2017 11:59:00 AM

This is a good contrast you came up with. I have no clue how to do this theme. But I better get my thinking cap on.GREAT job, Alexis. Good luck in the contest.

Tim Smith

Date: 1/28/2017 11:55:00 AM

I pray things will be clearer for you...Lovely verse