Chanukah Candles

I got my box of candles
With exactly forty-four.
I hope that I don’t break one
If it bounces on the floor.

Or maybe one’s defective
With a wick that just won’t catch,
Despite the fact I’ll light it
Using match plus match plus match.

Occasionally, one is bent
And will not stand up straight,
But leaving it behind, of course,
Is not up for debate.

A box of cards was always packed,
Since errors do get made,
With one or two more envelopes
Than for the cards displayed.

Yet candle boxes take a chance
That nothing will go wrong
And there will be enough each night
To sing the candle song.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
December 30, 2022 at 10:54 PM
I know this feeling "Using match plus match plus match." and more than once I have learned it.
Watt Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 2:52 PM
ilene, i hope you enjoy your feast of lights with flawless candles, and much family love to go around... happy Chanukah, my friend ~ john
La France Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 11:56 AM
Ilene, wonderful poem. I hope all your candles light, blessings
Cunningham Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 1:45 AM
Hope you don't come across any duds Ilene, enjoy your celebrations. Tom
Anaya Avatar
December 17, 2022 at 4:59 PM
Ha ha, O you had me at the very first stanza! O chanukah O chanukah. Happy Chanukah Ilene
Wolf Avatar
December 17, 2022 at 4:55 PM
You're right... Watch out for the blue ones. They look great; but snap easily. ~ gw
Slaughter Avatar
December 17, 2022 at 12:43 PM
Ilene, I'm sure, whatever the challenges, you'll make everything work out alright.
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