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Chanukah Candles

I got my box of candles With exactly forty-four. I hope that I don’t break one If it bounces on the floor. Or maybe one’s defective With a wick that just won’t catch, Despite the fact I’ll light it Using match plus match plus match. Occasionally, one is bent And will not stand up straight, But leaving it behind, of course, Is not up for debate. A box of cards was always packed, Since errors do get made, With one or two more envelopes Than for the cards displayed. Yet candle boxes take a chance That nothing will go wrong And there will be enough each night To sing the candle song.

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Date: 12/30/2022 10:54:00 PM
I know this feeling "Using match plus match plus match." and more than once I have learned it.
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Date: 12/19/2022 2:52:00 PM
ilene, i hope you enjoy your feast of lights with flawless candles, and much family love to go around... happy Chanukah, my friend ~ john
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Date: 12/18/2022 11:56:00 AM
Ilene, wonderful poem. I hope all your candles light, blessings
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Date: 12/18/2022 1:45:00 AM
Hope you don't come across any duds Ilene, enjoy your celebrations. Tom
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Date: 12/17/2022 4:59:00 PM
Ha ha, O you had me at the very first stanza! O chanukah O chanukah. Happy Chanukah Ilene
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Date: 12/17/2022 4:55:00 PM
You're right... Watch out for the blue ones. They look great; but snap easily. ~ gw
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Date: 12/17/2022 12:43:00 PM
Ilene, I'm sure, whatever the challenges, you'll make everything work out alright.
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