Chant That Burnt Us

Pigeons fly our hearts cry with the song but peace seems to be always a wrong addiction to wars by the great powers is the chant that burnt us all along. (08.01.2022)

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 1/12/2022 5:58:00 AM

That's the ugly truth... Wars are fought for superiority but still in the name of people... Great write... Great theme.. Blessings

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed
Date: 1/12/2022 6:10:00 AM

Cordially accept your blessings! need that! Appropriate comment. Must obliged for the appreciation. Thanks - Marshall

Valsa George

Date: 1/10/2022 7:49:00 PM

Doves of peace fly with their song. But we hear louder the sound of bugles announcing battle ! More than the pandemic, man made rebellions and miseries are our curse. A limerick with some serious thought to ponder over....

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed
Date: 1/11/2022 3:38:00 AM

I knew you'd relate to it! Lovely, lovely comment! Thank you very much. Always, all the best to you. - Marshall

Douglas Brown

Date: 1/9/2022 10:49:00 AM

Great! Thank you!

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed
Date: 1/9/2022 10:54:00 AM

Yeah! many thanks for your comment. Your writing..... marvelous! Thanks - Marshall

Millard Lowe

Date: 1/9/2022 9:22:00 AM

Indeed, Marshall. How can you fight a war in the name of peace? Profound write. ONE. Peace and Love.4R

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed
Date: 1/9/2022 10:50:00 AM

Inspiration from a wise man and true poet like you means a lot, Millard! Really appreciate your encouragement. Thanks - Marshall.

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/8/2022 4:57:00 PM

Marchall, you wrote a great limerick. Your ideas were quite profound and full of analogies. Thank you for your encouragement and comments on my page.

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed
Date: 1/8/2022 5:09:00 PM

Thank you, kindly! your comment is inspiration for me. - Marshall