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CHANGING WEATHER

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morning sun's gold kiss~
then the sky tears its silk gown
hurls hail like raw pearls

12th gradestormweatherhaiku

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Line Gauthier

December 6, 2025 at 5:37 AM

This is a classy Mother Nature ~ love it Fav'ing

William Kelii Kekaula

November 25, 2025 at 8:19 PM

Through subtle seasons that intertwine in and out in all their days, then an abrupt challenge tears up ever so often, disrupting the normalcy that courses a change of said days.

Karen Jones

November 23, 2025 at 6:36 PM

Love that second line! Very creative!

sara Etgen-Baker

November 24, 2025 at 5:41 PM

awww, thank you, Karen. :-)

Paula Goldsmith

November 23, 2025 at 7:19 AM

I enjoyed reading with a good picture. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Everything is so dry here. We had more rain in the last few days then in the last 12 months. Now everything had a good drink/bath with fresh air. Hooray!!!! Have a Blessed day writing away..........

sara Etgen-Baker

November 24, 2025 at 5:41 PM

same here, Paula, with the rain...still under a flash flood warning...loved the sound and smell of the rain. Enjoy your Thanksgiving week, hugs, Sar a

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