Phyllis Babcock Poet Nonet

Changing Time

If I made a journey back in time
I could change things in history
Reflecting only the good
Changing a piece of time
Emitting the bad
transformation
reflecting 
today's
state.



If I could figure out a new way 
IF you could whirl it like a dime
and find a way to break time
changing space and matter
into fine segments
slowing matter
in seconds
stopping 
time


If I made a time journey forward
All would be changed for better
The bad would be erased now
transformation complete
new restoration
bring balance
a new order
on earth
complete

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Kabuteng P.Ink K. October 18, 2010 at 11:10 AM What a wonderful message you give in these series of nonets, Phyllis :) I think I would change some things too if given the chance-- nikko :)

Syed Amaan Ahmad October 15, 2010 at 12:53 PM Great one...enjoyed! It's too good!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 15, 2010 at 12:11 PM If only it were possible most of us would go back to change something... a grand write Phyllis ...hope u are feeling better today from your flu luv.. happy weekend.. enjoyed this lovely gift from your creative pen..

October 15, 2010 at 11:56 AM Thought provoking poem. Well done. Good use of this challenging form. Thank you for sharing your words with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire October 15, 2010 at 9:42 AM While it may be wishful thinking to consider changing the past, what we learn from the past can help us have a happier future. If we don't learn from our past mistakes, we're doomed to repeat them. Very thought-provoking and well-written poem, Phyllis! Love, Carolyn

Constance La France October 6, 2010 at 6:44 AM If we could only go back in time and change the bad, would it not be wonderful~~

Wilma Neels October 5, 2010 at 11:24 AM Phyllis this is a beautiful write. Enjoyed your trip back into time. Love Wilma

Sara Kendrick October 3, 2010 at 4:27 AM Excellent and praise worthy desire that you would do with your time off from regular life..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Good luck in the contest with this winners' circle write...I was encouraged with your kind comments on my work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich October 2, 2010 at 11:25 PM wow, I wish you could do that, Phyllis! I'd help sponsor your trip, lady! good luck in the contest. Luv, Andrea

John Loving Iii October 2, 2010 at 10:03 AM still in progress? sounds like you found away. john

Dr.Ram Mehta October 2, 2010 at 8:32 AM Nice impressive write for the journey back, Phyllis

Michael J. Falotico October 2, 2010 at 7:59 AM A wonderful begining to a beautiful write..always Michael