Changing Sky

How many are the years our world has been an entity? And for how many more has there been sky, the earth’s celestial skin, which must have somewhat changed from years before? In purer times, man may have seen it loom with diamond clarity of layered blues. Though like today, it also grayed with gloom, it must have dazzled dusks in splendid hues. And even now, despite new damage done to its most fragile part, how it can shine with utter brilliance, changing with the sun while we below keep marring sky’s design! Perhaps a Holocaust will bleed it red. Though changed, it will remain when all are dead.
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Wolf Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 8:41 PM
Another brilliant sonnet Andrea./|\
Cavanaugh Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 10:19 PM
Wow, What an incredible poem. I adore the rhyme, meter, and message of this poem. This will be going in my favorites.
Kendrick Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 4:17 PM
Great entry and winning work..Congrats..Sara
A  Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 2:19 PM
Andrea, .... congrats once again *****SKAT
Babcock Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 8:56 PM
You are fantastic at sonnets. The ever changing sky will keep on changing long after we are gone. Imagine what it will be like a thousand years from not. love phyl
Seal Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 5:18 PM
I expected this to be a winner, Congratulations Petal. Take care, Richard
A  Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 1:47 PM
Andrea, love your changing sky winning poem... :-) Congratulations (-: ~SKAT~
Ferry Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 1:02 AM
you certainly have a winning formula. It`s called talent..
Jordan Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 8:01 PM
Yet another dynamite poem, another winner. Congratulations, my friend... Jack
Otoole Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 2:49 PM
Congrats on your super win Andrea love how you write hope I get better too
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 2:26 PM
An excellent sonnet Andrea. I love the last stanza. Congratulations on you super win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Seal Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 6:11 PM
Oh yes Petal, put the wind up us all why don't yer lol. But that 'perhaps' does loom large in the sky, I would agree. I see you tried to placate yourself with Tom, pathetic lol. Take care, Richard
Horne Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 4:14 PM
love this thought provoking piece, my friend
Omara Avatar
July 2, 2013 at 8:41 PM
No, not a pretty picture, Andrea - but very prettily painted.-Red
Poet Avatar
July 2, 2013 at 1:57 PM
Wonderful!See you can mould any topic into the Sonnet form :)
Ober Avatar
July 2, 2013 at 7:40 AM
WOW. I love where you decided to take this topic. It is so true - We are slowly destroying our beautiful world. As always, a gorgeous sonnet written by your deft hands!
Ober Avatar
July 2, 2013 at 7:40 AM
P.S. My terzanelle took me a few hours to write - though not in one sitting. It is certainly a challenging form!!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 5:26 PM
Sobering thought. Well expressed.
Johnson Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 12:36 PM
Contemplation of the dust. New creations we just can't trust. Dawning in a day delivered. Maybe that's why the fearful shivered. Hello my friend. Thank you for the support you send. A HAPPY BIRTHDAY to your Joe. May many more, he come to know. Toodles. :)
Bauer Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 12:24 PM
a beautiful poem with perfect rhyme! very impressive...
May Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 9:50 AM
great sonnet Andrea...best wishes...thanks for stopping by
Devnath  Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 9:40 AM
Touching poem wonderfully done. Great truth of future end it's related with sonnet. Excellent way you have shown here. Loved always, bl
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 8:40 AM
Andrea a great message. Humanity needs to first achieve Heaven on earth, making the earth a better place for: gender harmony, spiritual harmony, racial harmony, and ecological harmony. Is that possible? Warm Smiles, Connie
Sathasivam Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 5:36 AM
Excellent. Very meaningful write. Enjoyed it. Tfs
Mohammed Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 2:29 AM
Beautifully penned Andrea.
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