Russell Sivey Poet Rispetto

Changing Sky

Its winter, very cold chill is in the air
Sky unfolds with a dark violet, purple hue
The snow on the ground enforces the sky’s glare
Beyond in a distant sky is a deep blue
As the evening comes to play entering red
An aura brought forward, like a heart that bled
As the sun has left only the lamps to glow
Now blackness covers the sky for all to know

Contest: Changing Sky
Sponsor: Gail Angel Doyle

6/23/2013

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Sara Kendrick July 25, 2013 at 4:27 PM Congrats on your great winning work..Sara

Skat A July 24, 2013 at 1:51 PM RUSSELL, love your changing sky winning poem... :-) Congratulations (-: ~SKAT~

Isaiah Zerbst July 23, 2013 at 4:59 PM Some of the best colours in the contest are found right here! Nice poetic way of describing it too!

Connie Gildersleeve July 23, 2013 at 2:57 PM Russell what an inspiration you are. This is a fabulous read and congratulations on your super win. Warm Smiles, Connie

John Posey July 1, 2013 at 5:24 PM My knowledge of the form is not even enough to offer a comment. But........I do know good poetry when I see it. ....Jake

Sara Kendrick June 25, 2013 at 6:18 AM Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this morn..Creatively you..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Nette Onclaud June 23, 2013 at 1:55 PM you make bleak tender with your spectacular writem russell.. a sensitive work of art!.. grreat stuff!... thanks for the honor of being part of your last contest. :) huggs