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8/14/2024 for Deciduous Poetry Contest sponsored by Craig Cornish

Changing Seasons, Changing Moods

I'm raised in SoCal, calm weather agrees,
and you, from Boston, know weather, severe.
Our states of mind match these climates I fear.
Like Winter sadness, leaves fall from your trees, 
and then I'm missing those green absentees.
Like Summer, a hot flare up may appear.
The reasons are celestially unclear.   
Oh, how will I deal with moods such as these?

Deciduous trees, specialists in change -
variety and beauty they will bring.
These shifts do add the color to my life,
as days with you I would never exchange.
In Winter, I am sure there will be Spring,
and I'm happy that I made you my wife.
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August 29, 2024 at 1:49 PM
So nice, David. Very appropriate for the prompt deciduous. Your iambic is very good along with the rhyme. Love the phrase "green absentees". Unique. Thanks for commenting on my entry, I have rewritten much of it and re-entered a new version under mostly the same title . Best of luck in Craig's latest.
Crandall Avatar
August 29, 2024 at 10:33 PM
Thanks for the specific positive feedback, Reason!
Greenhough Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 8:53 AM
Thank you for this poem and little look at a happy marriage. Years together are a blessing.
Crandall Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 4:02 PM
Thanks Hilda!
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