Changing Seasons, Changing Moods

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8/14/2024 for Deciduous Poetry Contest sponsored by Craig Cornish

I'm raised in SoCal, calm weather agrees,
and you, from Boston, know weather, severe.
Our states of mind match these climates I fear.
Like Winter sadness, leaves fall from your trees, 
and then I'm missing those green absentees.
Like Summer, a hot flare up may appear.
The reasons are celestially unclear.   
Oh, how will I deal with moods such as these?

Deciduous trees, specialists in change -
variety and beauty they will bring.
These shifts do add the color to my life,
as days with you I would never exchange.
In Winter, I am sure there will be Spring,
and I'm happy that I made you my wife.

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Date: 8/29/2024 1:49:00 PM
So nice, David. Very appropriate for the prompt deciduous. Your iambic is very good along with the rhyme. Love the phrase "green absentees". Unique. Thanks for commenting on my entry, I have rewritten much of it and re-entered a new version under mostly the same title . Best of luck in Craig's latest.
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Date: 8/29/2024 10:33:00 PM
Thanks for the specific positive feedback, Reason!
Date: 8/16/2024 8:53:00 AM
Thank you for this poem and little look at a happy marriage. Years together are a blessing.
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Date: 8/16/2024 4:02:00 PM
Thanks Hilda!
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