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Changing Seas

Oh lush kelp forests, tell me where you've gone your flowing rows of beauty swept away like changing tides, warm seas have moved you on to cooler shores, no longer here to stay while those you leave behind grieve you this day. The changing climate claims its greedy grip as schools of fish move through an old ghost ship 'neath barren reefs, so naked and so stark once dancing seaweeds swayed in rising riffs now solemn stillness bares pollution's mark. Written on 8/29/2016 Dizain

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Date: 9/2/2016 4:03:00 PM
Your poem sends out a great message Laura... I hope we take notice before it's too late:-( hugs Jan xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/2/2016 4:25:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. The negative changes in the ocean are heartbreaking to see.
Date: 9/1/2016 4:20:00 PM
Very well written Dizain on this theme of climate change, Laura. I like the very visual imagery. Barry.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/2/2016 4:24:00 PM
Thank you, Berry, for your comments. Glad you liked this :)
Date: 8/30/2016 11:20:00 AM
sullenly beautiful, laura.. i feel with you about nature's slow demise... winning wishes!..huggs
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/30/2016 1:13:00 PM
Thanks, Nette. I wrote this after snorkeling in the ocean the other day...it was a sad sight to see.

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