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Changing Probabilities

one life has ended
a spirit caste to the wind
watch the dragon-fly

For Marvin Celestial's Haiku Contest.
Written August 3rd, 2014.

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

January 15, 2015 at 7:27 AM

Celestial haiku moment Richard>>>rajat

Richard Lamoureux

January 15, 2015 at 8:11 AM

Thanks Rajat.

Darlene Gifford

September 18, 2014 at 11:09 AM

Rich imagery and heartfelt. One life here ends while another begins.

Richard Lamoureux

September 19, 2014 at 8:29 AM

Thanks Darlene.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 11, 2014 at 8:18 AM

Deep n thoughtful haiku Richard! Congrats on fine win!

Richard Lamoureux

August 10, 2014 at 6:58 PM

Thanks for all the thoughtful posts, I am a little short on time so I can't respond to each of your kind visits. Hugs Rick.

Tim Smith

August 10, 2014 at 6:53 PM

Congrats Richard.... Cheers

Mohan Chutani

August 9, 2014 at 11:05 AM

a deep one, Richard. Congrats.

Pandita Sietesantos

August 9, 2014 at 9:47 AM

Congratulations, Richard, on your wonderful win. I enjoyed reading this beautiful haiku. Excellent write! Pandita

Casarah Nance

August 9, 2014 at 9:36 AM

back again sweetie to grats your win :) I enjoyed this one a lot. You are awesome ;)

Paul Callus

August 9, 2014 at 9:28 AM

This is a haiku that becomes rich once we delve into it with awareness. The 'caste' is a pivotal word that acts as a hub for thought. Congrats, Richard. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 11, 2014 at 8:17 AM

Love ur thoughtful comments Paul !

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 8, 2014 at 10:01 PM

Amazing haiku on life, Richard. congrats

Robert Lindley

August 8, 2014 at 8:37 PM

I like this one my friend. Congrats on your win!!

D.W. Rodgers

August 8, 2014 at 7:53 PM

Well done Richard, my inner entomologist applauds

Richard Lamoureux

August 8, 2014 at 7:55 PM

Thanks Dave

Andrea Dietrich

August 8, 2014 at 7:07 PM

very clever how that ending has two possible meanings!!! I really like this. congrats.

Abdul Malik Mandani

August 8, 2014 at 6:46 PM

"dragon-fly?" Probably!

Jan Allison

August 8, 2014 at 6:39 PM

congrats on a great win Richard :-) Hugs Jan xxx

Shadow Hamilton

August 4, 2014 at 7:43 PM

a charming poem Rick gl in contest hugs

Richard Lamoureux

August 4, 2014 at 8:02 PM

Thanks Shadow, it's nice to have you back. Has life slowed down a bit?

Harry Horsman

August 4, 2014 at 3:44 PM

like this so much Richard,,truly gives the reader, many possibilities...like the reincarnation aspect..

Richard Lamoureux

August 4, 2014 at 7:09 PM

Hi Harry, I havn't dropped by in a while. I think I should rectify that right now. Thanks for the visit.

Casarah Nance

August 4, 2014 at 10:29 AM

I had to look up that word Caste, I thought you made an error, but now it gives it a whole new meaning and I am even more impressed. Well done!

Richard Lamoureux

August 4, 2014 at 7:07 PM

Thanks for exploring beyond the surface Casarah.

Eileen Manassian

August 4, 2014 at 8:31 AM

Interesting...so very different. I was wondering if you really meant caste. Not what you believe in, but interesting for the contest.

Richard Lamoureux

August 4, 2014 at 9:06 AM

You are right, it is a play on words that fit for the purpose of this write.

Verlena S. Walker

August 3, 2014 at 8:33 PM

What probabilities Rick... Enjoyed... Verlena

Richard Lamoureux

August 4, 2014 at 7:53 AM

His new life as a dragonfly creates a series of new probabilities that did not exist when he was in his previous Caste as a man. His actions in his previous life created the probability that he would become less than he had been. I do not believe in the Caste system but it came to mind for this poetic challange and it speaks to choices we make and the probabilities that change as a result of our choices.

Justin Bordner

August 3, 2014 at 7:04 PM

Karma is my Allie Richard, a force of justice, a teacher. Dragons are beautiful, and in most cultures a great symbol of strength and wisdom. I like the metamorphosis feel in this write. J.A.B.

Richard Lamoureux

August 4, 2014 at 7:57 AM

Thanks Justin, my allie, friend, teacher, Savior and God is my Lord Jesus. I am pleased you enjoyed this piece.

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