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Emotional depression had set in; A world of calamity that grew dark. The mystical light was stifling, nights stark, Blessings of peace in a bottle of gin. Dark wisp of wrath kindled a plea to flee. Extinction of self as he walked with pride Through vast ocean tides, I became a bride. Lull dream, a perfect soul-mate weaved forth, free. Neath the still lingering velvet twilight Holding a portrait of the two of us. My mournful mind wanders without a fuss. Sweet scent of love, my memories I write. Quiet and peaceful with poetic love, Tearful grief embraces you from above. 10/22/2023

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/5/2023 5:21:00 PM

A beautiful write my dear friend Eve. You always amaze me with your breadth of poetic inspiration. :)

Beata Agustin

Date: 11/1/2023 12:15:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thank you for sharing this. God bless you.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 10/24/2023 11:25:00 AM

Hi Eve I love your sonnet that flows and rhymes so beautifully fav poem for sure hugs Shadow

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/24/2023 10:08:00 AM

- A profoundly sensitive poem, dear Eve :) - hugs

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/23/2023 11:32:00 PM

This IS one of your most creative ever, Eve! I found it unmistakably powerful and at the same time, soulful! I don’t write sonnets because I do not understand how to write in metrical form. Sure I can rhyme, but no way in meter A fave. Love, Pangie

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/23/2023 8:38:00 PM

I enjoyed this poem. Grief is difficult. Thank you for these thlughts.

Joseph May

Date: 10/22/2023 4:05:00 PM

A poignant write Eve, Well written

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2023 1:47:00 PM

So sad and soulful, Eve. Great imagery.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/22/2023 1:22:00 PM

Your poem deeply touched me, Eve. The line 'holding a portrait of the two of us' pulled on my heartstrings. I can feel your grief over your. My heart goes out to you. The last line 'tearful grief embraces you from above' was poignant! A beautiful write. Enjoy your Sunday, Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/22/2023 9:31:00 AM

Great though poignant sonnet. I relate well with you. One cannot forget the past. You and I will always grieve our loves. Can't be helped. Blessings.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/22/2023 2:44:00 AM

This made me tear up, its never easy when one is mourning and memories keep crawling back in, and sometimes we want those memories to be close within us, as thats the only way we feel close to what we’ve shared with our loved ones, as for here i think you speak about your beloved? Poetry is solace and can give one comfort through it all. “ Holding a portrait of the two of us. My mournful mind wanders without a fuss. Sweet scent of love”those lines speaks volumes! Sending you light always

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 10/22/2023 2:18:00 AM

It is difficult when you feel down and helps to talk to someone. A good poem and description. Well done.

Silent One

Date: 10/22/2023 1:49:00 AM

a sonnet of sorrow.. I hope you are ok.. feeling down is never an easy thing, especially when we feel alone.. Your sonnet rhymes and flows so well..