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Changing Forms

Trying to write a Pantoum is fine
 But what if you miss a line
 Then it becomes a pain
 When you have the wrong refrain
 Then Rhyme is the form you assign!
 
 1- 2-2021

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Jennifer Proxenos

January 23, 2021 at 5:33 AM

So true Joseph, after two and a half years on this site and trying different forms of poetry, what you say is quite possible, I will remember it in future. Great write, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

January 20, 2021 at 2:52 PM

ha, yes, you can always just call it rhyme! I've actually had to do that a few times when I messed up a form such as pantoum. Good one.

Judy Ball

January 9, 2021 at 9:36 PM

I'm not really good at forms. I just know what I like. I usually go by the message and if it has good rhythm and if I can understand it. Good stuff here Joseph. God Bless, JB