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Changing Face Autumn

The deepest cut those
striking at one’s very heart
verdant to golden
transformation of nature,
another’s death for a life

© Harry J Horsman 2013

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Charmaine Chircop

November 12, 2013 at 8:01 AM

So very powerful this is as powerful as mother nature's impact on us through every season.

Bl Devnath

November 3, 2013 at 10:11 AM

My lovely friend, you have touched one of the causes of the change of Autumn wonderfully. A wonderful picture you have brought with very deep feeling philosophically. Loved always, bl

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

November 3, 2013 at 9:11 AM

wow xx

Arthur Vaso

November 3, 2013 at 12:06 AM

So much wisdom in so few words, great poem!

Andrea Dietrich

November 2, 2013 at 8:15 PM

oh MY, this is THE BEST from first line to last. Loved the imagery at the start and the message at the end. I hope this is the one you enter in the contest. The middle poem also I think would be great for the contest. Luv, Andrea

Sandra Adams

November 2, 2013 at 7:31 PM

autumn has always been an inspirational season...so much beauty and then death...I like this one, I think best of the 3 ...all were a delight to read :)