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Nine feet tall now
Very slim mysterious
Dark cloud covers sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chamma Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 3:06 AM
A very vivid and somehow mysterious Haiku...well-written.. Always, Farah
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August 28, 2009 at 7:04 PM
This poem is quite mysterious as well. I don't think the cloud is the nine feet tall structure. I think whatever it is is making the sun get covered by the dark cloud the way you see in the movies when something really ominous and bad is approaching, then rain starts pouring and lightning and thunder soon follow. Whatever this nine foot tall thing is, I don't think it spells good news...very compelling Sara. -Yoni
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